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Aaaah! O MY GOD!!!!! All three cats and two other family members just turned to lookat me to find out why I screamed. You are the QUEEN of the plot twists and I so did not see that one coming. BRILLIANT!!!!

At the beginning of the chapter with Jack letting Pintel beat the crap out of him and shoot him in the chest, I was pretty confused lol. But I stuck it out knowing that Jack always has a plan up his sleeve. The takeover of the Dauntless was great! Yay Cap'n or should I say, Commadore Sparrow!

Also I liked the appearence of the ferrets, very very cute. :D

Truly, woman you have no shame. Invoking Tinkerbell to get reviews! Damn, I wish I'd thought of it. I absolutely love this story. To watch James turn to Robert and be convinced of it is no small accomplishment. I really love it.

*feeds the plot ferrets* oooooh, more, more, more. This totally rocks. I love Jack prancing around in foppish gear, the idea makes me go all weak at the knees. Nice to see stuffy old Norrington letting his hair down & living it up a bit. Please continue with this story, pleeeeeeeeeease!

This chapter is just FUN! The simultaneous education and corruption of the commodore is delicious. As the chaptnds,nds, all I can feel is a tremendous anticipation and think, "I wanna go too!"

Let's see, have I used the word genius yet? Nope, I've checked my reviews thus far, and its missing. I am dazzled. I also have to tell you that there is a balot lot bunny lurking in my story that will look familiar but from a very diferent direction. Boy, this is fun.

You really are brilliant. So now I'll be really presumptuous and say great minds think alike. When I post chapter 3 of my story, know that I wrote it before I read this. Interesting.....You must be a food fan as well. On to Chapter 4....

Hellborne, you and those ferets are something else. Having already tapped in to the daydreamer, the voyeeur, the architect and the sleuth in me, now you tap in to The Crusader. As there is nothing more vile and loathsome on this earth than slavery, I am eating this up with a spoon. I love it.

This is a dazzling beginning. You had me engaged from word one and then never disappointed me. Jack at his machiavellian scheming best, a fascinating twist with Lizzie as the captain, a great cause to make kiiling seem justified. Actually I've had some thoughts about slavery myself, and how it fits into Jack's story, so it will be interesting to see how we both follow those lines. ove ove seeing peoples' different visions of these characters.

I would love it if you could take a look at my story Surprises, and comment as it develops. I think my strong suit is more the word play and romance, and you are obviously BRILLIANT at adventure, so I'd love to have the benefit of your feedback.

I can't wait for your next upda Blu

I like it so far, please continue! I'd give you something for your plot ferrets to eat, but I'm not entirely sure what ferrets eat.......
But anyway, keep writing!