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July 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
well done.
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February 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow....wow. I just finished chapter five-one of the best written love scenes of any fanfic--particularly since it took awhile in coming. Please keep writing--now I know which author to go to!
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January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This...eee...mmphm...there are no words...
You are a ridiculously talented writer! This little sex-scene there between Jack and Suzanna was one of the very sexiest and steamiest things I have EVER read...that is to say a alot, as I am a single 18-year-old gal, and as a result I read alot of stuff like this ;)....
If I had a had...I'd take it off for you :)
You are a ridiculously talented writer! This little sex-scene there between Jack and Suzanna was one of the very sexiest and steamiest things I have EVER read...that is to say a alot, as I am a single 18-year-old gal, and as a result I read alot of stuff like this ;)....
If I had a had...I'd take it off for you :)
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, the way you wrote it is just beautiful... I would love to see more from you.
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March 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a beautiful love story; made better by the lovely smut. Thank you so much. Always lusted in me heart after Cap'n Jack.
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January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I missed reading this story while I was gone. I wasn't dead which was the popular belief, I've been busy with college stuff so I'm sorry for not updating my story and not reading yours. Please update yours soon and I'll try my best to update mine.
-Chelsey-
-Chelsey-
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December 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You're sure this is your first? Pacing, variety, development, timely revelations--you've got it all in hand. I want to go talk to a neurologist now, and find out how to get real life lovers to run the rigging as satisfyingly as your fictional ones.
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December 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lovely Magic. So pleased to see this fic finished and in such a wonderful way. Loved Suzanna's speech to Norrington. Also the ritual of her swearing allegiance to the Pearl and the ending was such a celebration of escape from confines, freedom and a new life and kind of love. Well done.
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December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was beautiful, truly
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December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I could wait until i'd read the whole thing but I just had to say something.
"Well, Well, Commodore. Come to surrender the fleet? And this not even my birthday,"
Ha ha ha. It's Jack! It's just what he would say...If he were real that is. cough cough.
But yes, bravo. If the rest of this story is as brilliant as the opening chapter I am going to be hooked every step of the way. xx
"Well, Well, Commodore. Come to surrender the fleet? And this not even my birthday,"
Ha ha ha. It's Jack! It's just what he would say...If he were real that is. cough cough.
But yes, bravo. If the rest of this story is as brilliant as the opening chapter I am going to be hooked every step of the way. xx