rate_review Reviews

Fantastic. You are truly able to weave a magic spell with your words. I will be anxiously awaiting your next effort!!!

Bravo!!!!!!!

Sorry - too lazy and drunk to log in!

Lovely chapter - I hope you do a sequel and soon.

Absolutely splendid conclusion to an absolutely splendid story. You are truly a gifted writer and I fervently hope you continue your lovely, fervid writing. I understand RL can be a great hindrance, but it would be a real shame to waste such wonderful talent. So write a sequel, or write a different story, but whatever you write ~ WRITE!!

Thank you thank you for this lovely story! I truely like it. A great Jack and a wonderful idea with Elizabeths cousin. She is a brilliant woman. I doubt though that my review can be as thrilling as your love scenes, they were so good to read and enjoye.

Is this the end of the story? I would love to read more.

Well, milady, a wonderful ending to a wonderful story. Now you have to go ahead with the sequel...how Suzanna becomes a TRUE pirate...well, she's already stolen (commandeered?) Jack's heart...

Sorry for taking so long to finish reading it...I've very little time online so I've had to do it in partial chapters. But OH, those partial chapters!

Hellborne

Wow! What a great surprise(no pun intended!) ! It's been awhile since your last update. Mas vale tarde que nunca(better late than never)! You have a really good story going! Your original characters are really great and you've played off the movie characters beautifully! Mas updates soon, por favor! Date prisa! Tu eliges!(hurry up! It's up to you!) Keep up the great writing, mi chiquita! Tengo que irme! Salud! (I must be off! Cheers!) Killer K JGEL :)

This has got to be one of the best stories I have read. I love the way you write and explain everything in such detail. Keep up the good work!!!

Thanks for a lovely chap...so glad to see you had updated!
The only thing I didn't get that I really wanted in this chapter was the story of how Jack got back...and news of the Pearl, how is she and who's in charge in Jack's absence?
Wine cellar love, now there's a thought...one would have to be careful not to break things, though... :-)
I am wondering...is this the end, or will there be more, or a sequel? I surely hope there will be more, in some form!

Aww, Magic you made me blush with your credits! Love the chapter. The pacing is fast and the sex is hot and fast too. Thank you for the moment in the cellar. Suzanna will make it up to Jack, I'm sure. XOXO

Wow. Can't believe I've been missing all this!! I'm extremely thrilled to have stumbled upon this stoTookTook me a bit, but I easily got through every one of these marvelous chapters in just under three hours. ^.^ Really, your writing is excellent. You've got excellent writing style, the plot is great, unique, and utterly captivating. I love how you've portrayed Jack, and Suzanna is a magnificent character. The relationship between Elizabeth and Jack is truly the best I've ever seen and the father-son relationship between Jack and Will is the best I've seen as well. The icanicane was an excellent plot idea, which I truly love and have never seen used in another story. I couldn't ask for anything to make this story better. ^.^ I absolutely love it, and now I'm utterly addicted to it. ^.^ Can NOT wait for anotheapteapter (one which I hope will come swiftly) and I am eagerly awaiting to see what happens next for Jack, Suzanna, Will, Elizabeth, the Pearl, and the rest of this marvelous cast! ^.^
Write MORE ASAP!
Best Wishes,
Kat Carvell