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by bluemagic132003

person anasazi
schedule September 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What Carol said...DOUBLED!! I am SO hoping there is going to be more of this. To paraphrase Capt'n Jack: PLEASE write?!
person Carol
schedule September 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm back, being greedy, read all the way thru The Fight. Damn, woman, this is so good. Oh, 'scuse me, I'm assuming you're female...you write so convincingly I'm assuming you must be... I see I'm more than half finished with the existing chaps. Is Port Royal the end? I hope not, I sincerely hope not! I love EVERYTHING you are doing with this, and want it to go on and on.
person Anon
schedule September 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I've read the first two chapters (recommended by a friend) and I'm hooked. Absolutely bloody marvellous!! Can't wait to get to the rest.
person nuit
schedule August 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
mmmmmm..sorry just read that again..thank the lord he came back..was desperate for him to..ok so she was too
person Chelsey
schedule August 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! I know exactally how she feels. I loose my other half for 6 months out of the year to the damn place that is college. Fortunatly for me I know for sure when he's coming home. Update soon. I love this story.

-Chelsey-AKA: HisBeautiful
person Killer Kadoogan
schedule August 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! What a great story! I can't contain una cara alegre(Espanol for a smiling face)! Can't wait for more updates- Date prisa, porfavTu eTu eliges!(hurry up, please! It's up to you!)Why am I writing like this? No tengo ni idea! (I haven't got a clue!)You're probably thinking ' Cierra la puerta?' (Were you born in a barn?) No, I just like using what very little Spanish I know- makes this Southern hillbilly feel smart. Once again, love your story. Keep up the great writing. Tengo que irme! Salud! (I must be off! Cheers!) All hail Johnny Depp- the great creator(?) of the marvelous Jack Sparrow! - I'm sorry- I meant "Captain" Jack Sparrow!
person Ani Sparrow
schedule August 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was wonderful. I thought for one horrible moment you were going to do something... stupid. You had me going through the whole gamut of emotions there - bravo!
person sarah
schedule July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story!!!! Great writing! But don't leave me hanging here, PLEASE update soon!!!!!! I can't wait to see what's coming next!!
person anasazi
schedule July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Words cannot express how happy I was to see a new chapter for this story. It just keeps getting better and better, and keeps me eager for more. May your real life settle down to pleasantness so you can write more. thank you so much for gifting us with this story!!
person nuit
schedule July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this just gets better and better if that is possible...there are ideas and thoughts flying around so generously it is hard to catch hold of them all first time round.. i love it
jack and suzannas landscape..wills taste..the beach..just lovely and gorgeous.more more ..please