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July 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh goody!!! I can't wait to read your next chapter! Please update soon Magic! Oh and go check out La Belle Rosa, Chapter 5 is out! Can't wait to read your review.
What's in store for Will and Elizabeth???????!!!!! Hurry and update!!!!
-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
What's in store for Will and Elizabeth???????!!!!! Hurry and update!!!!
-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
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July 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Haven't reviewed in awhile, for that I'm sorry. Real life intruded, what can I say. Anyway, good story. I'm curious as to how they're going to become rich but I figure you'll elighten us soon enough. Keep up the good writing.
C.J
C.J
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July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh wonderful 2 chapters Luv. Jack has fallen and fallen hard. Will got to take the helm, and take Elizabeth too for that matter. Heh. Loved the part where Will slapped Anna Maria on the butt. Also now the plot thickens, rich beyond their wildest dreams......hmmmm. I really like the part where Jack talked to Wll about his father, wonderfully done. I love this story the characterizations continue to be right on the mark. I cannot wait to read more.
Hugs
Amy
Hugs
Amy
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July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well done, my dear! Sorry I haven't been around for a bit...I've been doing migraines instead...I'd rather be reading your story!
Looks like next chapter will be "it" unless you've got a new plot complication. Excellent work and extremely entertaining!
I've finished The Sail Maker...could you look at it and let me know what you think please? I'm curious...
Hugs!
Hellborne
Looks like next chapter will be "it" unless you've got a new plot complication. Excellent work and extremely entertaining!
I've finished The Sail Maker...could you look at it and let me know what you think please? I'm curious...
Hugs!
Hellborne
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June 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HOLY HELL! Unbelievable! I really think that chapter may have been one of the most beautiful things I have ever read! This is just getting so good. i love this story!!!! Keep going please!!!
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June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lovely chapter, but I can't help wondering wheres iss is all leading?
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June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe chapchapter! I loved it! You wrote the ocean/sex scene so well. It's like the couple was truly free. Please do write more! You made it all so real! Continue!
and look for chapter 5 of La Belle Rosa "Devils, and Black Sheep, and Really Bad Eggs!"
Update soon!
-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
and look for chapter 5 of La Belle Rosa "Devils, and Black Sheep, and Really Bad Eggs!"
Update soon!
-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
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May 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please, please, please UPDATE!!! This story is so good in so many ways we're hungry for more! SOON!! PLEASE!!!
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May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I still wish all sex were that good! That was so hot! I almost need to go take a cold shower. I did enjoy the midnight snack theme, twas brilliant! Please do update soon!
This just keeps getting better and better!
-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
This just keeps getting better and better!
-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
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May 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Now that's more like it! i stil just can't get over how well you characterize all of them and i think the more you delve into the personals the better the sex is! but yes..more sex! detelytely.