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May 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm! That chapter has made me hungry now.... d'you think Jack will come and feed me?
This is a great story and I apologise for not reviewing sooner. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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May 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hello Luv! Jack and food and hot sex! Gasp! Drool! Swoon! Thud!!!!!! Oh my what a chapter. It is a pity you do not get more reviews I have been a staunch and true fan since chapter 1 and will continue to be one. I love this story and the characters. There are not enough het fics and this is a gem. I cannot wait until the next chapter.
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Amy L
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Amy L
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May 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great update!! I was so scared you were done with this fic, but I added your author page to "Favorites" and just kept checking back until I found the ever-so-pleasant _surprise_ of a new chapter! Sorry, luv, couldn't resist[insert Jack's cheeky smile here]. Great writing, great imagination. Please keep going. Must. Have More!
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May 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hello Magic my dearest! Sorry about the delay in reading Chapter 10...I've been rather, shall we say, "indesposed" regarding the entire Internet...
Anyway, fantastic story! Reminds me a little of something...I'll tell you about it some time...it's not from any fics I've read. You just keep on writing and writing and writing, and I'll be one happy Hellborne!
Love ya!
Hellborne
Anyway, fantastic story! Reminds me a little of something...I'll tell you about it some time...it's not from any fics I've read. You just keep on writing and writing and writing, and I'll be one happy Hellborne!
Love ya!
Hellborne
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May 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This fiction is great! One of the best at getting Jack true-haraharacter. Is it finished or will there be more? I HOPE more.
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May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
An amazing chapter!!! Very well told story of her past! I love how complex and well rounded you've made Suzanna and Jack.
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May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok...Awesome...thats all i can say...just totally awe struck with this story. i love it!!! please...more...please!
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May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Magic! Now I know where you came up with your pen name! That was pure magic! I love your writing. Please do go on. I'm dying to see 's 's in store. Oh God that was beautiful. Please update soon
-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
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May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don't quite understand what it is they are fighting about. He saved her life. Good chapter though.
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May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your spot on characterization of Jack continues to amaze me and Jack's conversation with Ruby was delightful. Your sense of drama is very finely honed as well. This story continues to be a delight with every chapter. Please keep up the excellent work
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Amy L
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Amy L