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LOML,

Wow, This story is great.

Especially chapter 8. I didn't know you could think of these things, much less write them down. I, for one, am glad you can, and do ;-)

WhiIe reading it, I completely forget that it is you writing it. (except for the occaisional totally Signature moments)

I can't wait till Chapter 10.

Hey there! I really am enjoying your story! I especially like the tender side of Jack, you have written it very very well and I can really see how well he and Suzanna are matched. Good job!

*~*~* Daisy

And thanks for being such a faithful reader of my stories!

I like what you did with Chapter 9 ~ starting it from the end was great! When's 10 coming? Put aside that OB fantasy and remember where your heart is ~ with Jack! Love you!

Magic, love, you are so great! This is definitely one of my favorites!

Please keep going!!!

Hellborne

excellent story! this is your first fanfic? wow! I love how you've written/created Suzanna

You evil Harpy!!! I want you to write more more more!!!! This is getting to be a great story! but I must admit I miss the smut. I did like the fight however and cannot WAIT until you update. So do it soon or I'll find out where you live and tie you to the keyboard until you've finished the story!!!! But please update soon. I'll be waiti
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-Chelsey!-
AKA: HisBeautiful

OK! you are right! haha i am not likeing you! You just can't leave me like this! This has got to be one of my favorite fanfics...you have a great talent for writing. I really love how jack praised Ruby but then she ended up being a hag....classic Jack! haha and also I think my favorite thing that jack has been saying is "Christ on a stick!" haha its sooo funny. Makes me crack up every time. I really think you are doing and excellent job but oh yeah...MORE SEX! haha Jack just makes it so great...keep goin' luv your doing wonderfully.

Phenomenal writing, and really rich character development. Along with deliciously sinful sex scenes--can't get enough and am waiting for more more more...I'm completely hooked!

Hi! I just sat here and read your whole story, and I have to say I l I like it, a lot. You are very good with descriptions, I had a very good picture of Suzanna early on, and she seems like a perfect match for Jack. I loved the part in the last chapter when Jack asked if he was going to have to kill the welp just when he was getting interesting. That cracked me up. You have cha character down pat, and I'm slightly jealous. I have such a hard time writing him. Good work, and thanks for your input on my story as well. I'll be reading yoursat'at's for sure!!!

*~*~* Jedi Daisy

MORE MORE MoRE! what a great story!! i just love the way the characters interact! its fabulous! i want more please!