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(Jack's offer shook him out of it. "Will - I'll get Gibbs to take over at
the helm. Grab a bottle from me cabin and meet me on the terrace and we'll
have a little chat. Elizabeth will be so happy with me she'll probably knit
me a sweater. And Will - mind you tell the crew that the women had best not
get wind of this little wager, or it'll be both our nuts in a noose." )

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JUST LOVE YOUR HUMOUR
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(It was a particularly warm evening and Jack had kicked off the thin
blanket and lay stretched out in all his glory. Christ, she had never seen
anything more beautiful in her life, particularly as he was either having a
very good dream or he was already awake and waiting for her. )

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WELL THANK YOU! THAT'S JUST GONE AND SPOILED ME FOR LEGOLAS FOR A WHILE
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(Gives a man pause as to the cause. although the effect." and he shuddered
again. )


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Love the way you play with words...magic...so good
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(and was truly lost to the deep.)

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WHAT A BEAUTIWAY WAY TO DESCRIBE IT...ESPECIALLY FOR A PIRATE...GOD YOU ARE GOOD AT THIS.
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( still hadn't been to sleep but he didn't think he cared if he ever slept
again.)

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YOU KNOW THAT IS JUST HOW I FEEL WHEN I'M THINKING ABOUT LEGOLAS
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("Had I suspected, I might not have burned the rum."0

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WHAT A LOVELY WAY TO FINISH.. YET ANOTHER MINDBLOWING LAST LINE
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Magic, my dear, you have pure talent there for comedy...and romance. Truly delightful!

I'm so glad I was finally able to read without interruption this time! Please continue...this is magnificent!

Hellborne

I loved the latest two chapters. Jack is such a rogue. You manage admirably to keep the characters "in character" while adding you own personal flair to them. I like that Suzanna is willing to accept what ever Jack is willing to give. The skirmish with the French ship was very well written as were Jack's comments. I loved chapter 8, it added a lot to the story. Suzanna telling Elizabeth off was something I would have done. Her talk with Will later was also very well done. Look at the results it had, it made Elizabeth very happy. As always Jack and Suzanna are so very hot together. Elizabeth's parting comment to Jat tat the end of the chapter had me laughing with delight. Thank you for making my day by alerting me to your lovely updates. I cannot wait to read more.
Hugs
Amy L

ANOTHER AWESOME CHAPTER!!!!!! GAAAAAAAA!!!! You must write more or I'll die! You don't want me to die right? Cuz then I can't finish MY story. Which will be up ASAP. God I just got a brilliant idea for my smut from your smut. It's not taking ideas I promise on my pirate soul. It should be good though. Keep a p eyp eye out for chapter 5 Really Bad Eggs! Update soon!

-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful

well blow me knickers off! a chapter dedicated all to meself!
you must be a kind hearted pirate. kind hearted, but with a lewd
and lusty soul....just how i like my pirates. it makes me happy that
my suggestion inspired you. i think the different format worked
really well for this chapter. since most of the story was conversation,
breaking it up into segments involving two characters at a time was
prolly the best way to write this chapter. whats the point of adding
filler? breaking it into segments also made me feel more like i had
stumbled into viewing these private moments, which i found very
enjoyable. who doesn't have a little peeping tom in them? also, was
i picking up a little heat between will and suzanna? and the last couple
lines with the exchange between elizabeth and jack was definatly hot.
hmm, maybe alittle group grope is in order, savvy? now that is any
y
i would love to join! i totally want to write my own fan fic now, maybe i
can bounce some ideas off you? well any-hoo can't wait till the next chapter!
rum flavored gold toothed pirate kisses luv xoxo

Well now... I've been away for a bit and look what I miss Won Wonderful! Love the humor, the steamy sex, the inuendos, the romantic sappy stuff.. all of it!

C.J.

Ok Ok OK...............SMUUUUUUUUUUT!
I feel better now. You should so update this fast! I love the story line and I need more! I loooooove your story Blue Magic keep it up!
oh and have you read my 4th chapter? Cuz 5 will be up soon.

-Chesey- AKA:HisBeautiful

I wasn't sure if I would like this when I first started reading it...but it's amazing! I cannot wait for more!

That was a fun chapter!

Great! Please continue.