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oh, thank gaaawd, you posted a new chapter. i was waiting for it with
breathless anticion. on. i'm very much smitten with your story. can't wait
till i get to read about will and lizzy's reaction to the snog-fest. hmm, maybe
they should join in on the fun, have one big pirate orgy!
arrrgh-wanna little pirate in yah? xoxo

Magic, my dear. I can't figure out why you don't have a lore hre hits than you do. This is simply magnificient! As you know, I don't usually like OCs (especially the female variety), but this story is NO Mary Sue! She's very realistic, and for ONCE I actually identify with the WOMAN of the story!

Don't know how you managed to pull that one off, but please continue...PRETTY PLEEEZE?

Very hot! Just when I thought a love scene couldn't get any better you go and top it! Also, I agree with the other reviewers, your Jack is "spot on".

oH yes I say again you have really captured Jack..oh excuse me.. Captain Jack..wonderfully. His cockiness andyfulyfulness, all 100% pirate. As to the delicious sex scene... pardon me while I go stick my head into the freezer..I believe I had a hot flash or 4. Heh. I cannot wait for more this is a wonderful romp.
Hugs
Amy

All i can say is dear god! I want to be locked in Jack's cabing for a day and a half! This story is getting gooooooood! Keep it up! and thanks for the review!
Update soon!

-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful

Oh , lovely chapters. This story is so so brilliant.
I adored this line "No , but I do believe that dear William has finally learned to recognize an opportune moment."
because it was a favourite moment of mine in the film.

I need air too, when Suzanna is around Jack. The sexual tension is driving me insane. The stars and the moon passage are so beautifully romantic...sigh.. and we get to see a really unusual and thoughtful and interesting side of Jack here.. Nice.
Love the bit about the rabbit making ricees ies in the moon. You have such a wonderful knowledge about things like this from all over the world. well done. You inspire me to do more research into things myself.

The springing Jack from jail scene was great too, excellent use of the psychology of Suzanna's ruse to free him and how she accomplished it, and a great way too, to let us into more of her background. You are a stunningly good writer. Stunning.

The sex scene... what can I say..speechless.. Wow, gorgeous, wonderful. I shall re read this many times I expect.
I want Jack too, hot and hard against me, if this is how he makes love. Just lovely. More More More. Can hardly wait for an update!

Oh my God! That was the best POTC fanfic I'vad sad so far! I hope you are continuing. You should be writing professionally if you aren't already.

oh my, i dare say you took my breath away...
i'm not the type that usually reviews, but your story telling
talents are too good for me to not respond to. i'm head over heels
iuateuated with your story, such great character development! how many more
chapters do you plan to write? hopefully more, and soon!
*rum flavored gold toothed pirate kisses xoxo

Bravo! Another Het fic!
Great story so far and you have captured Jack wonderfully. Intriguing plot, great characterizations. Wonderful descriptions, also a very erotic love scene. What more could I ask fI caI can only think of one thing........More Chapters please.
You are doing a great job so far and I eagerly anticipate reading more.
Hugs
Amy

I like Chapter 5! The only nitpick I have is a couple of errors in the French parts, but that's mostly because I'm a French translator. Other than that, this is a really good story, and I want to see where it's going.