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Magnificent, my dear!eat eat plot, great visuals! And although I'm far more into slash, the sex scene was wonderful! You really do need to keep this up. It's great to see quality work. I love it!

Hellborne

I bow in the presence of a writer who both got Jack right and gave him an OFC who gives as good as she gets (probably in several senses of the phrase)! I still can't get Jack right, myself.

I'm looking forward to reading more of this.

I see what you meant about chapter 3...but not to worry. Many authors see Jack as having been to the orient and getting food there...

Still fantastic! I can definitely visualize everything perfectly! I tend to "watch" books as if they're a movie...your story lends itself well to that, which many fanfics don't. Congrats!!!!

Oh yes...you asked about the names of my ferrets: Carlton (my favorite, the youngest, and the one who seems to be channeling in Satan), Tic Tac (a tiny mint with a nibble), Wednesday Addams (my only biter left), Sweetums (after the muppet), Nibbles (after the baby mouse in the diaper in Tom & Jerry), Kluster (the princess of the bunch), Post (who is deaf as a...), Molly (either Brown or Weasley...we've never been sure), and Vega (queen of the bunch).

Hellborne

Hi Blue Magic, Well you know how much I like this! It is just great. Your Jack Sparrow is spot on..spot on and Suzanna is going to be great. A match for Jack indeed.
It has been a great pleasure to read this, posted here on the site and getting the reviews so soon that it deserves. I am sure we can all hardly wait for more.
Especially after that F***ing delicious last line... of chapter 2
"For the first and only time that any of them could remember, Jack Sparrow had taken his pleasure with his eyes closed."

Priceless, absolutely priceless.......!!

I am thoroughly ingtrigued by this! Love Ms. Harcourt. And I think you've captured Jack Sparrow as well.

C.J.

ROTFLUASTF!!! This is positively the most delightful story I've read! You've got Jack perfect! And your lady is no Mary Sue!

I've taken the liberty of putting this on my favorites list. You've got me rolling on the floor laughing uncontrollably and scaring the ferrets! You simply must write more, and quickly! Do you have other stuff somewhere else? Email me the url if you do!

Truly, this is a MUST read for POTC fans!

Hellborne

LOVE IT!!! keep it up!
I do so love a good beginning! And Please read my story too. It's called La Belle Rosa. Thanks

-HisBeautiful- AKA: Chelsey

At last, another person who can actually write! Your form and 'voice' are great, now let's see where the story goes. Jack/OFC stories are fine by me, just don't think about having him get (gasp) married. 'Married' and 'Jack' don't belong in the same sentence.

well have read this several +++ times and just wanted to say that what is stingingly sharp on first reading becomes razor like on subsequent visits..you come back and think...fuck ..yes that is exactly it. the portrayal of jack is amazing- he is human-not cartoon- he is vibrant, funny ,real and incredibly sexy and i just want to get to read more more more-can't get enough of him and his stuff with suzanna-
and the lovemaking- written with experience, love, emotion and a love for this inspirational pirate that shines through..and did i mention that it is so hot it melts me..