rate_review Reviews

You should update. because i said so. Lol. No really, you should update. This is a really good story and i love it so far, now i wanna see where its going! UPDAAAAAAAATE!!!!!!
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cant wait!

I like this, a neew oew of Will. Please, PLEASE update soon!! :]

Yes, much as everyone else has been saying; this is very talented writting, but its a bit of a novice act to just retale a story that we all *hopefully* have seen. I'm sure once theres something *worth* reading (meaning, different. cuz not meany would want to read when they can just watch the movie) then the reviews will come POURING in.

~Arukas

Really as yet there's nothing to review. As far as I can see, you're simply retelling the story, and adding in some thought bubbles once and awhile to make it your own. You have style, though, and I'm interested to see where you take it, once you move away from the movie. ...You *are* moving away from the movie and branching into an actual story, aren't you? I hope. *smiles* We shall see. Once there is more.

A dominatrix? Will wants to be female?

you're gonna have to write faster.

I like your story so far and I'm hoping that you get to the good stuff soon! but I just wanna make a comment that sofar you've just been retelling the movie with not much extra insight on the part of the characters and I think it would imporve it if yddeddded a bit more povs and if you're willing, why dont you change the story up so that it's different form the story, i know that you'll be changing it once you get to the slash and such but why not try making a different chain of events? but I'm not the author so dont take me too seriously *winks* cant wait for more! :)

I love your beginning, it is such an unusual take on Will. I would love to read more of your story soon! I would have more input but I am a horrible reviewer....

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I really like the start of this story *lol*
Real great *smile* I know its not right but I can't stand Liz, the girl is annoying like hell. Will belongs to Jack *nod* and I want really too know what you make out of thies ^-^
The start is fantastic for all thats mattert.
Soooooooooooooooooo pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaasssssssssssseeeeeeeeeeeee write fast at the second chapter I so want to know what happens to young William in good old boring Port Royaach*ach*
So I hope that my gramma is not that bad *sigh* sorry but to read ish ish is so much easyer than to write when it's not your natural/first (What ever) language.

See ya

Glorry-chan