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by Elisabeta

person Not Write Here
schedule April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved this. I could fall down and worship you for this. I typically prefer seeing One as the dominant and Two as the submissive, but when I stumble across a really well written take on Two being dominant like this one, I'm impressed.
This was a great fic. I thoroughly enjoy it.
person Starrchylde
schedule October 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. Interesting use of "I" versus "We". Gives the impression that One is more dependent on Two, an idea I don't think I've seen before. Nice work.
person JEM
schedule May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*_* I like it alot ^__^ Its very good. Those twins are just hot together...and I mean together ^^;
person Teigra
schedule April 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love these two. they make you unbelievalbly hot...