rate_review Reviews

That fic was great or as Sands would say.
"Fan-fucking-tastic!"

I love how you wrote it. It really keeps the reader guessing.
The ending is great too.
Sands does go after crazy people like him doesn't he?
*grins*

Nice writing. Actually coherent! I like that in a story. I enjoyed the way it went from a dream to reality and back again. Very clever and interesting.

I... am absolutely in awe. I couldn't seem to catch my breath while reading this incredible fiction. First of all, you're a tremendously talented writer. From the first sentence on I was hooked. Not only can you keep the pace of the story flying and throw in hair pin twists and turns, but your characterization was just... astounding. Everything that happened, every reaction, every word spoken was so absolutely *believeable.* le ple play (because I'm a big dork xB) El and know that he is not the easiest person to portray, particularly when trying to keep him in character while having shipping him with Sands. I mean, the guy's carrying around a lot of baggage. (I also happen to be a huge El/Lorenzo shipper as well, so I VERY much appreciated that bit). All in all, this was probably the best fan fiction I've ever read. Not just in a OUATIM fandom, either, but *anywhere.* Absolutely brilliant writing. I hope to see more of your work!
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Lizzie

Ah... hauntingly beautiful, to be a tad trite... Perfect.