schedule
September 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
One chapter? That's it? (cry) Write moooore!! Plz?! ^_^
schedule
September 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Me again. Just read your other reviews and i'd like to say this:
I hate thinking of Jack rapping her to but... he IS a PIRATE. pirates do that.
I love Capt'n Jack to. but he ain't no gentleman as you can tell by all those slaps he got.
hehe.
pirates do as pirates will.
hate to break it to ya'll.
nice story. ^_^
I hate thinking of Jack rapping her to but... he IS a PIRATE. pirates do that.
I love Capt'n Jack to. but he ain't no gentleman as you can tell by all those slaps he got.
hehe.
pirates do as pirates will.
hate to break it to ya'll.
nice story. ^_^
schedule
May 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loved your story!'
I want Sparrow to "keep" me too!
Anna
I want Sparrow to "keep" me too!
Anna
schedule
May 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I thought that was ok. It wasn't really good because Jack was like a total JERK! you should make another chapter, and he should shape up!-quickly!
I thought it would be better if you made Jack a little less of a jerk that would make ur story a WHOLE lot better!
I thought it would be better if you made Jack a little less of a jerk that would make ur story a WHOLE lot better!
schedule
April 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry, I really can't see Jack as a rapist. Completely OOC.