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August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Uh...chapter 14 is the same as 13. Good story, anyway. Can't wait for the rest
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August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg i love this!! With a shocking passion! lol i saw “Struggle for Control" last night, stayed up all night reading it and then today i saw the sequel lol this is the second night in a row I've stayed up all night reading one of your fics. Yep. I deem this rockin =D
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September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved Struggle for Control and I love this one just as much. It adds a different perspective to see Shooter in Amys mind rather than Morts. Theres is just one thing, chapters 13 and 14 are the same. Believe me when I say that I will keep checking back to see if it has been changed. Love it so far by the way. xx
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September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! You've just got to update soon! I love this! Great sequel! Please please please continue this! 'Tis awesome ! :D
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November 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You are an amazing writer! Please continue your story! I want to know where it is leading what with Shooter now within Amy...
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September 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay, apparently begging is in order. I'm cool with that. HEY WOMAN!!!! I'm following at least 3 of your stories on this site and you've just left us all hangin'! Please update soon! I hope all is well with you!
GG
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July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*squeek* Very well writen, good twist. Wish I had read it earlier though.
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July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hi!
i read Struggle for Control on fanfiction.net and also the 'extended' chapters here, and then i discovered the sequel... which is just great! even though i liked the first ending of SfC better, but oh well :) Mort is just sooo adorable in this fic! all excited about Hallie (love that name, btw), and taking so much care of Alex... *sigh* and i really wonder who that voice inside Amy's head is. maybe Shooter, maybe not... guess I'll find out :) and btw, i hate Amy too! I was sooo pissed at her when i saw SW! and that scene in the movie where Mort drives to her house and thinks "this is not my beautiful house. this is not my beautiful wife. anymore", it's so sad! and she's there all happy with Ted and stuff, and Morty is all alone :'( that bitch! anyways, i hope you update this quickly! :D you rock!
i read Struggle for Control on fanfiction.net and also the 'extended' chapters here, and then i discovered the sequel... which is just great! even though i liked the first ending of SfC better, but oh well :) Mort is just sooo adorable in this fic! all excited about Hallie (love that name, btw), and taking so much care of Alex... *sigh* and i really wonder who that voice inside Amy's head is. maybe Shooter, maybe not... guess I'll find out :) and btw, i hate Amy too! I was sooo pissed at her when i saw SW! and that scene in the movie where Mort drives to her house and thinks "this is not my beautiful house. this is not my beautiful wife. anymore", it's so sad! and she's there all happy with Ted and stuff, and Morty is all alone :'( that bitch! anyways, i hope you update this quickly! :D you rock!
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June 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like it! Even though having it all Shoter-less doesn't really make sense. Still shaking from reading the first one, too. I completely blanched when Mort saw it was Amy. I don't like her either, but it freaked me, because I just knew it would be her.
Strange, ne?
~Emmy
Strange, ne?
~Emmy
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April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Amy's.. hurt? Dying? Oh, happiness IS. n.n
Aw.. I love the couple! They are just so cute! You know what an excellent writer you are, right? You just know what to make happen. Real emotion-tweaking talant. ~.^ Wonderful!
Aw.. I love the couple! They are just so cute! You know what an excellent writer you are, right? You just know what to make happen. Real emotion-tweaking talant. ~.^ Wonderful!