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OH HELL NO!! THAT WOMAN DID NOT JUST COME IN TO MORT'S HAPPY HOME AND START SCREWING WITH IT!! I THINK AMY GET'S WHAT SHE DESERVES, WHICH IN MY OPINION IS A GOOD ASS KICKING!!!! OH, POOR HER SHE FINALLY DISCOVERED WHAT SHE HAD AND GAVE UP, NOW IT'S TO LATE!! (Rolling my eyes and fake sighing) Nobody cares about her sad little life, she made her choice and now she has to live with it! I totally agree with not liking Amy!!!! SHE'S PATHETIC! I know this sounds horrible but when I watched "Secert Window", the many times I saw it, I never was upset that Mort killed her. In fact, I felt she was partly to blame for her own death, for obviously causing Mort to lose his sanity because of her indiscretions. I felt worst for Chico, then her! Ofcourse in your new story Mort never went crazy but that woman still caused him alot of pain. I was wondering who was going to be the antagonist role in your story with Shooter gone. Now I see that role will be filled with the desperate, whimpering Amy (Sticks out tongue and makes gagging noise). Sorry that just seems to happen everytime I think about her. Though I have a hunch that Shooter might actually make an appearance after all, just to Amy this time. At the end of chapter 6, Amy was starting to sound an awful alot like Mort did it the movie, and we all know what that means....(going to get the shovel). I love a good Juicy drama with a little suspence and Shooter would certianl tha that. Can't wait to see if my hunch was right and if I'm totally off base, maybe you could consider it anyways?(smiles)

OMG.. Amy is such a BITCH!

I think you write her perfectly. All needy and weepy and b-i-t-c-h-y... Gods. I hate her with a shocking passion. >X

Oooo! NO! What's gonna happen with Alex? Too soon? >.< Eeep! Poor thing! Pregnancy's gotta be hell.. well, sof thf the points, anyway. I wouldn't know. o.O

NOT WRITE ALL WEEKEND?? *faints* Awful cliffhanger! BAD! *thwaps the author with a flyswatter*

So I'm guessing Amy's gonna be a huge part of this?? Eheheh.. I hope the ho dies. XD

Hey! this is heaps gd! Update soon!

(Standing on chair clapping and cheering!) Ohhhh! You don't know how happy I am to see your return and with a sequel to one the best stories, I've read on the net!(Jumping up and down) Words can't even begin to describe how much I loved "Struggle For Control". Just the other day at work, I was telling my friend how she had to read it! I even offered to deplete my ink cartridges and print it off for her! Your Mort was so sweet and adorable (messy hair and all). I found your writing to be greatly entertaining and frankly, addicting. Believe me I put alot of important things on hold just to read your lastest updates, not that I regret it for a moment.(smile). So glad to see that the sequel begins with happy ending, but than again the sad ending has Mort commiting suicide (still a good ending), just not much left for a sequel. This new story is terrific (as expected)! Can't wait to read more!!!!!!!!

Wow very interesting, please go on

ACK! AMY! BIIIIITTTCHHH! *dropkicks her back to the Ugly Muggit (AKA Ted)* Get her away! She has no right to ruin Mort's life again! *ROAR*

..*ahem* Ah, yeah. o.o

Anyway, Julia is just so cute, you have no idea. Or.. maybe you do. 'Cuz you invented her. Oh well. The interaction between the whole family is just perfect, and a lot like my own. Which is cool, because Mort fits in so well with them. Which means he'd fit in so well with mine. XD Bwuahahah..

Onward! n.n

*bursts out of her pop-up tent, a half-eaten bag of dorritos in hand.* WEEEEE! A SEQUEDoesDoes a happy dance*

Oh, and while I'm at it-- *Does a first review dance* (I hope I read the count right.. heh.)

Yes! I'm am SO happy. You've made my day. n.n

Aw.. Mort is so sweet. I totatotally see him as a family man, and you are writing him out with utmost perfection. Continue!

P.S.-- I wanna hear him sing.. *drool*