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Wow. That was certainly interesting, seeing the darker side of Jack. I've always suspected that it's there--I mean it has to be, he is a pirate after all, and just because they don't show him butchering people like the other pirates have done doesn't mean that he isn't capable of committing atrocious acts. I don't believe there ever was a gentle pirate, and I've been curious for a long time about what Jack's aggression would look like once it was revealed. This is a good depiction, I think. And of course he would take Will hostage; pirates enjoy breaking all the rules, and a sin as frowned upon as sodomy would be irresistible to Jack Sparrow. All in all, this plot was not so far-fetched as some might think. ^_^

I enjoyed reading your fanfictions. They are both disturbing and exciting to read, and fuel my (fangirl) fantasies to the core. This is about the fifteenth one that I've read, and I'm enjoying myself extremely. If you could, would you please contact me the next time you post a story? Thank you.
Kali

Aww, that was so bittersweet. Love a good dose of angst. Thanks for posting it. I like the somewhat twisted relationship between jack & will. It just seems so true to form especially after DMC, eh?

Absolutely wonderfully done. Incredibly erotic. Beautifully written.

really good fic... is there more to it or does it end there? if there its, thats kool. i liked it. good job

I loved dark Jack. You portrayed Will well also. The only thing I think would have made it better would have been a little more sadomasochism. Oh, well. Great story!!

*dies of overall sexiness* This. Was. Fabulous. It's so nice to see a darker side of Jack like that....
Thank you for writing this.

HE'SDEADHE'SDEADHE'SDEAD!!!!!!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! WILL NOOOOOO DON'T DIE!!!!! AHHHHHHHHHH!!!! CALL THE ABULANCE CALL THE PARAMEDICTS CALL MY MOM!!!!! WE HAVE TO SAVE WILL!!!!!!!!!!NNNOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!! JACK HOW COULD YOU!!!???? HE WAS SSSOOOO PRETTY AND YOU KILLED HIM!!!!!WAKE UP WILL!!! WAKE UP!!!(starts shakeing will)NOOOOOOOO!!!*SMACK!*ooooowwwwwwwww!!!

It's FANFICTION YOU MORON!!! I'M ALLRIGHT!!!!!

YAAAAYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Creepy. Very well written, though I'd have made Will fight a tad more for his lass. No matter. Sail on :)

I was too lazy to sign in...It was good but I just wish you would have went into it more...Jack being all mean and Dom on Will. That boy needs to learn his place.