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June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this. Good PWP, and fun in how straight it is played. I hope you continue this.
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April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, lovely! Finally we have a straight time-line for your fic. I wonder if you're gonna make the story devellop like in the movies/books, though since you have mutated Leto's breeding program, I guess you could change the plot too. Very hot, very arousing. Love it sooooooooo much. Update soon.
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April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Leto is the dominating male.
Jessica is the strongest appearing female so far.
Irulan is perfectly naïve and as pathetically bimbo as described in the books. Good job on preserving that by the way.
So, since you seem to be doing all the women in the Atreides family, I wonder who will be next and what status you will be giving them. I understand they’re all meant to make up his harem but still, even in a harem there a positions. Will you have him marry one of them or will he rule alone, keeping them like caged possessions, kept only for breeding purposes. Is this idea of the (mutated) breeding program going to continue with his children? How? I can’t wait!
Sorry if I’m pestering you. I just SO like this story!
Jessica is the strongest appearing female so far.
Irulan is perfectly naïve and as pathetically bimbo as described in the books. Good job on preserving that by the way.
So, since you seem to be doing all the women in the Atreides family, I wonder who will be next and what status you will be giving them. I understand they’re all meant to make up his harem but still, even in a harem there a positions. Will you have him marry one of them or will he rule alone, keeping them like caged possessions, kept only for breeding purposes. Is this idea of the (mutated) breeding program going to continue with his children? How? I can’t wait!
Sorry if I’m pestering you. I just SO like this story!
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April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
How interesting... I never thought of this possibility. You made what would otherwise have been a disgusting porn fic, into a rather arousing and mystifing encounter. I wonder where you are going with this story though. I am very interested in seeing this story evolve and I promise to be a good lil reader and review every chapter so GET WRITING. I like it!