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January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Um i like the plot, kinda, but i dont like how it is written in first person. you turn around. you blink. i prefer it in third, she turns around, she blinks.
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November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm. I'm not really grooving on the second person.
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October 17, 2002 at 12:00 AM
I loved your stuff on the ill fated ff.net and I still love it here. Please, keep up the good work!
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October 16, 2002 at 12:00 AM
Bravo ! Very well written. I was on the edge of my seat.