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July 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i love the way u write ur fics! don't ever ever ever stop!!!!!!!
r u going to write another chapter?
PLEASE!
Alex
r u going to write another chapter?
PLEASE!
Alex
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July 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Whoa. Totally sexy. Jack and Will would be so hot together. Fine writing!
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July 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah, more pirate slash. *_* Must buy soundtrack and re-read all pirate slash. More please?
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July 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
.........very.....weird....but also at the same time very good i like it......kewlies
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July 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ohh... How steamy! Liked it. :D Can't wait to see the movie, it's bloody irritating that it won't come here till August. >:( But already now I think we should get rid of Elizabeth/whatever her name is.
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July 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Again, another great story (didn't realize this was the prequel to The Show...oops!). I thought it was really humorous that Jack tied Will up...poor Will although Jack certainly made it up to him! :) Write more soon!
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July 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Throughout the whole movie, I just wanted Barbossa to kill Liz in a horrible, bloody manner so that our friends Will Turner and Jack Sparrow could fuck like bunnies. Or donkeys, whichever you choose. Thank God for this fic.
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July 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
RAR!!!
I wants them! Mwahahaha!
Actually, as soon as I go see the movie, I shall join thee in slashing Orlando Bloom and Johnny Depp, AND thier characters! MWAHAHAHAH!
*jumps overboard*
WHEEEE!!
-Anu
I wants them! Mwahahaha!
Actually, as soon as I go see the movie, I shall join thee in slashing Orlando Bloom and Johnny Depp, AND thier characters! MWAHAHAHAH!
*jumps overboard*
WHEEEE!!
-Anu
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July 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I was ecstatic to finally go see the movie that stars everyone's favourite refined elf-boy & the God that is Johnny Depp. Absolutely loved PotC. As a fangirl, OF COURSE I was hungry for some Jack/Will slash as soon as the two shared a frame.
I thought that such would be hard to fiif iif it ever even saw the light of day, and it just so happened you posted a Jack/Will piece here & I stumbled upon it! I was pleasantly surprised that it's already "started".
I'm a hardcore fanfiction fan, keeping to my short list of experienced, ACTUAL writers who produce the most insigtful novel-length fanfics about my fave boys. I don't usually read PWP fics... Yours is the first I have since last year, actually. I must be honest, and admit I only skimmed through it BECAUSE it is the first Jack/Will.
Not counting the complete lack of plot (Side Note: Your fic reminded me that teenage girls write PWP simply because they'd like to imagine the two ACTORS doing each other - if it were for the characters, there'd be a plot :D ), because the work falls into the PWP category; OR the SEVERE OOC-ness, because frankly, countless fangirl writers have used it as an excuse to ruin chars - therefore I refuse to argue with them anymore, and instead of accusing the 'writers' of not knowing their characters at all, I'll just go along and excuse the OOC-ness due to the "fan" in "fanfiction". ;p
Your skills are obviously undeveloped - there were a lot of repeated words & phrases, thus making the fic hard to follow and dull. *shrugs* Though usually a lover of hot sexy smut between two (or more, lol :D XD ) men, I had to skip all of the sex part between Jack & Will, just because it was so un-realistic and repetative. Unexciting. And, golly, the language you used was too modern! Anyway, you get points for trying. :)
I believe that wiime ime you'll improve. So keep writing & good luck! Also, Thank You for being the first (to my knowledge) to write Jack/Will slash.
I hope to be the first to illustrate it, so we'll see, we'll see...;D
I thought that such would be hard to fiif iif it ever even saw the light of day, and it just so happened you posted a Jack/Will piece here & I stumbled upon it! I was pleasantly surprised that it's already "started".
I'm a hardcore fanfiction fan, keeping to my short list of experienced, ACTUAL writers who produce the most insigtful novel-length fanfics about my fave boys. I don't usually read PWP fics... Yours is the first I have since last year, actually. I must be honest, and admit I only skimmed through it BECAUSE it is the first Jack/Will.
Not counting the complete lack of plot (Side Note: Your fic reminded me that teenage girls write PWP simply because they'd like to imagine the two ACTORS doing each other - if it were for the characters, there'd be a plot :D ), because the work falls into the PWP category; OR the SEVERE OOC-ness, because frankly, countless fangirl writers have used it as an excuse to ruin chars - therefore I refuse to argue with them anymore, and instead of accusing the 'writers' of not knowing their characters at all, I'll just go along and excuse the OOC-ness due to the "fan" in "fanfiction". ;p
Your skills are obviously undeveloped - there were a lot of repeated words & phrases, thus making the fic hard to follow and dull. *shrugs* Though usually a lover of hot sexy smut between two (or more, lol :D XD ) men, I had to skip all of the sex part between Jack & Will, just because it was so un-realistic and repetative. Unexciting. And, golly, the language you used was too modern! Anyway, you get points for trying. :)
I believe that wiime ime you'll improve. So keep writing & good luck! Also, Thank You for being the first (to my knowledge) to write Jack/Will slash.
I hope to be the first to illustrate it, so we'll see, we'll see...;D
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July 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Will that be in the movie? LOL. But really, I can't wait for the movie to come to my country. It will take some time....