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March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very well written compared to some of the crap around here. you don't forget how to be a good writer just because there's a sex scene. great descriptions of thoughts and feelings
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February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Just bloody, Wow!
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August 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A very good story.
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July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting story
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May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AWWW WHY DID YOU STOP THERE PLEASE UPDATE REAL SOON
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May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AWWW WHY DID YOU STOP THERE PLEASE UPDATE REAL SOON
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May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AWWW WHY DID YOU STOP THERE PLEASE UPDATEL SOL SOON
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May 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved this! You did a great job of portraying both his love and passion for Padme and his inner darkness and need to be in control. Wonderul! I can picture their relationship proceeding much like you wrote it. Great job!
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May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great piece, pensfan. Very erotic and hot without turning into porn. I read this when you posted it at AAEF but just had to say 'bravo' again! My favorite parts are when the Jedi all assume Anakin's reactions are due to entirely different reasons than what is actually occuring *G*
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May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this demands a second chapter!!!