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for Saving Grace

by PiratesWench

person Jez the Jealous
schedule April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lmao. I was sniggering all the way through this. I love their bickering! It's just so adorable! Sheldie's just a lovable, demented pain in the ass, isn't he?

Gracie's cool. XD All of your OFCs are cool. You do a great job making them seem very realistic.

Onward! n.n
person Jezzy the Jealous
schedule April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aha. A review. :P Hehe. I hope this one actually comes through.

I just find it ironic (In a cool way, no worries!) that Sands, in this pathetic condition, would run into a girl namedce. ce. Is that not just perfect? I love it. n.n

Once again, you captured the character from the movie flawlessly. Even Pele was just perfect. He was such a good kid.. If I saw this guy running around with blood running down his face, I think I'd freak. Well.. maybe if it was someone as sexy as Johnny, I might stick around. >)ExceExcellent!
person Jezrael the Jealous
schedule April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
“Then I have two words for you, Gracie: sponge baths.”

*thud* OMG.. I think I would have drowned in my own drool.

*AHEM* anyway..

Poor Gracie dear. He's a definate smart ass-- is she gonna try and kill him?