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for Devil's Stare

by LilacsKissGoodbye

schedule December 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I liked it! Please write more!
person audrey
schedule November 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AH! why did u stop???? i liked it a lot! i think dracula should try to stop anna from leavin with van helsing...ya! keep goin!
person bloodraven
schedule October 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love the intro to this story I really hope you do continue with it!
person Wildredrose
schedule May 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was really good, please write more, even if you have to change the films storyline, do you think that you could get another meeting between Dracula and anna? Having it from his point of view might also be a good, but only for some of it! Keep up the great typing!

Wild red rose
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please write more. please please please please..............i love dracula.................PLEASE!!! i'll love you for ever!!!
person Dracula\'s Evil Princess
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great so far write the next chapter asap
person Aleera
schedule May 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very Impressive use of Vocabulary and suspence n_n And who would've though..A Gypsy Royal And satan himself..Good job n_n -claps- I'll rate tops on this.
person blabla
schedule May 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
chapter one is perfect!!! I do hope you will write more!
person Dutchgirl
schedule May 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good beginningp itp it up :)
person Cerulean Blue
schedule May 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM

This is actually pretty good so far. You're very good with descriptions and I like what I see so far from you. I think you should probably go back into Anna and Dracula's past history...we know they have some since the movie tells us the Valerious fy hay has been fighting Dracula for ages..so surely she's encountered him before. Just a suggestion. Happy writing!



CB