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for The Dark Queen

by ceruleanblue

person Feeny
schedule June 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's a good start, and an interesting premise. Keep going!!!!!
person HealerAriel
schedule May 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don't get how people can NOT like happy endings. I'm a sucker for happy endings myself, but this IS intriguing so far, so I'll keep reading it. Please, please, please, at least make it a "nobody-dies-and-they-part-on-friendly-terms" ending?

And I'm wondering why Irina looks so much like Anna. Plot point? Or supernatural interference?
person Aleera
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very Awesome I'd love to hear more from you-pokes- n_n
person Feedbackgirl
schedule May 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good beginning keep it up :)