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for What Jack Sparrow Wants

by JennyPugh

person Anon
schedule April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
so far i realy like your story (up 2 ch8) but i wanted to say that yes it would legaly be called rape and blackmail along with a few other things his got up to.
person DanzaPalooza
schedule July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Rather abrupt ending (not unlike "Dead Man's Chest...lol), but I shall be looking for the sequel!
person Alon
schedule July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I read this story in one go this afternoon. It's truly, truly wonderful. I loved how you explored Jenny's confusion about her feelings and had the relationship develop slowly. I also liked the action and exotic, well-research locales. You've got Jack absolutely pegged. It's the best Jack Sparrow I've ever read. I'm off to read more! Whoohooo *applause*
person summerraen
schedule July 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
TOTALLY AMAZING. My only complaint/critisism is how much the Captain says "luv"- it loses it's effect when it's in nearly every comment he makes. But other than that, I'm looking forward to reading the next few chapters (I only just started), but it be a fine piece of work, m'lady!
person Kathy
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Too long. I simply got tired of reading it. Too much domestic details and not enough action. Sorry.
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this story is amazing!
person MarzBar
schedule March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good story with lots of good plot twists. I intend to read the rest of them soon. Thanks for writing.
person Karasu8
schedule January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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schedule November 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant characterisation of Jack. Much kudos for the fiesty yet believable Jenny!
person dramaced
schedule October 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nothing short of amazing...magnificent...completely enjoyable! And thank the gods there is a sequel. I'm completely addicted and loving Bittersweet Homecomings, already on Chapter 3. You have a wonderful talent for PLOT and of course you have Jack down pat. I was thinking this morning that when the actual film sequels come out they are going to be a bit of a letdown for those of us privy to stories like yours. For one thing, we get so much more detail, such wonderful insights into Jack that a brief film simply can't give, no matter how wonderful...and then there's the fact that the Mouse will insist on PG or PG-13 at the worst, so no sex for dear Jack...tsk, tsk. Thanks ever and ever so much for writing this!! There aren't words enough to tell you how vividly you bring it all to life.