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Hey you should update soon. I'm getting ansy. Update soon or I'm going to flogg you, and not in the good way either. Great chapter.

-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful

Yea! a new chapter!! I don't envy authors trying to post in the last few weeks. I'm going to donate again and hope aff can stay up! Thanks Ani Sparrow for the great story!
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hurry and update soon, preferably more than one chapter! I need to find out what happens when she finds Jack!!!

You tease!!!! I must have more of this wonderful story! I may not survive without it! Help! Update soon.

-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful

Yeah! Yeah! Yeah! Another chapter! I was pleasantly sorprendido (surprised) when I checked up on your writing.And I very naughtily read the chapter while I was supposed to be talking to my mother-inlaw on the telle. Darn woman can call at the most inoppurtune times! Enough said, I've got to go reread the chapter to make sure I didn't miss any details during all the babble coming through the receiver. Can't wait to see what she does to Jack- I think a spanking is in order! Tengo que irme! Salud! Your loyal admirer, Killer K :)

puuuulease more, with wippy cream and a cherry and sprinkles on top. i need another chapter!
i think its great that you decided to not just end it with them finding the treasure and living happily
ever after. i'm loving the agnst, and hope there are scenes with jack desperatly missing
jenny.

Oh how sad! Makes me want to cry! If I was Jenny I'd be "borracho como una cuba" as well! ( That's espanol for 'pissed as a newt' - so little remembered from highschool Spanish class- Mrs Rios would be so disapointed!) Such a great story , can't wait for an update- Tu eliges(It's up to you)! I know I'm being " un conazo" (pain in the arse), but it makes me feel so wordly and distinguished to use the very little Spanish I know. It's probably more anoying than "una resaca" (a hangover). Well, enough torture, please keep up the great writing and I will be anxiously awaiting new updates, por favor! "Tengo que irme. Salud!" (I must be off. Cheers!) Killer K

Another fabulous chapter! Keep up the fine work. I can't wait to read about the promi nig night!!!! Update soon! HisBHisBeautiful- AKA: Chelsey

omg... its so good, the adventure has been so exciting. normally i find the non sex bit boring but your treasure hunt has been realy good

Nice! Yay! they found the gold! I wonder what they're gonna do now? Will Jenny stay with Jack? I can't wait until the next chapter! Update soon.

-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful