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August 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
mmm, that last chapter romp with jack and jenny was yummy. you have done a great job with the character development.
can't wait to see were else its going. xoxo
can't wait to see were else its going. xoxo
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July 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
FAB!! Absolutly FAB! I hpe you update soon. You write the best chapters.
-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
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July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great job! Can't wait until the next update!
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July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am totally in love with your story! Please update it soon. And you're right there is no love without a few bumps. Please update soon! There's only one thing I'd like to mention. It's Realize not Realise. I'm not being mean I just thought I'd help. Lord knows it took me forever to spell that damn word. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Update soon!
-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
p.s- If you feel like reading and reviewing my story, the next chapter will be out soon. Just search under my pen name (HisBeautiful) Thanks!
Update soon!
-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
p.s- If you feel like reading and reviewing my story, the next chapter will be out soon. Just search under my pen name (HisBeautiful) Thanks!
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July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
just finished reading all the chapters and i have to say bloody fantastic, iv not read a fan fiction story as good. im completely hoocked. please update soon
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July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i like the fact that you did the 'rape' thing it makes the story more real and intresting. im sick of the whole girl falls into jacks arms things. it also gives an oppertuinty to explore deeper into jack sparrows charcter. very well written i must say and the darker side of jack coming through has given myself inspiration to right beond girl falls into jacks arms, dont worry im not going to copy it but its hard to write potc storys when there all the same and you feel that your story must fall into it.
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July 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic! Even the (sorta) rape bit was well done. I'm glad Jenny finally gets to enjoy the beauty that is Captain Jack Sparrow!
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July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent writing. Professional, exciting, great portrayal of Jack. Please keep it coming (no pun intended).
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July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whew! Anyone else feelin a tad....er...warm? ; )
great chapter, ani.
great chapter, ani.
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July 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good Chapter - we all appreciate your attention to the little details. However it was just too short and you have left me desparate for more...ugh...
Can't wait for more
Can't wait for more