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July 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
woohoo! another chapter!
I love how this story is developing and unfolding. The plot has some great twists which advances it rather nicely, PLUS the characters are growing as the plot advances. Sometimes fanfics can be a series of repeated scenes, but this...this has the makings of an epic!
Excellent work. And....FINALLY. Jenny thaws. huzzah!
I love how this story is developing and unfolding. The plot has some great twists which advances it rather nicely, PLUS the characters are growing as the plot advances. Sometimes fanfics can be a series of repeated scenes, but this...this has the makings of an epic!
Excellent work. And....FINALLY. Jenny thaws. huzzah!
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June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another big bravo! Man, I gotta get busy on my next chapter!
I love the obvious work you put into researching for this fanfic. You're very careful to get the wording and spellings correct, as well shipboard routines. I hadn't even considered that Puerto Rico might have had a different spelling at one time. You rock!
I love the obvious work you put into researching for this fanfic. You're very careful to get the wording and spellings correct, as well shipboard routines. I hadn't even considered that Puerto Rico might have had a different spelling at one time. You rock!
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June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh, btw: I want it to be known that I only asked when would she start ENJOYING Jack, not liking him! Enjoy and Like are two different things! Basically, I'm waiting for her to stop being so damn uptight! LOL! : P
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June 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I want more. Love Jen. Love the story. MORE SOON PLEASE!
C.J.
C.J.
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June 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lovely, lovely, lovely! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Update soon!
-HisBeautiful- AKA: Chelsey
Update soon!
-HisBeautiful- AKA: Chelsey
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June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Totally loving this story, Ani. And for the love of god, WHEN is Jenny gonna start enjoying Jack? ; )
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June 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More......soon.
I thought the whole 'rape' scene was fine and needed to be there. It was very welne ne
I thought the whole 'rape' scene was fine and needed to be there. It was very welne ne
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June 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay,
I think you are going to have to learn to type faster. I just finished your last chapter and now I want more *eyes the door to make sure DH is not around to make fun of her* More you hear me more.......
I don't think I am going to last the weekend ...honestly....
I think you are going to have to learn to type faster. I just finished your last chapter and now I want more *eyes the door to make sure DH is not around to make fun of her* More you hear me more.......
I don't think I am going to last the weekend ...honestly....
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June 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
For some odd reason I can't see Jack forcing himself on a woman. Although I do like the way you handled it. It wasn't exactly rape, but of course it wasn't fun for Jenny either. I do hope she warms up to Jack, and Jack in turn is sweet (as a pirate can get) to her. Nice story. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Would you give my story a read and review? It's called La Belle Rosa. Thanks if you read it. Update soon!
elseelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
elseelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
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June 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another good chapter. I wish Jenny would lighten up a bit. I saw her do it a few times in this chapter and now I can't wait for the next!
Update soon! and check out my story please, It's called La Belle Rosa.
Thanks!
-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful
Update soon! and check out my story please, It's called La Belle Rosa.
Thanks!
-Chelsey- AKA: HisBeautiful