rate_review Reviews

cute. Thanks :)

Very hot, and totally adorable.

~~~“I’m a little… busy righ’ now, can it wai’?” Jack pleaded at the door with his eyes as Will sighed and nuzzled the captain’s neck.

“I ain’t waitin’ around for ye to finish yer fantasies about a certain blacksmith! Pull up yer pants an’ let open th’ door!” Will gave a short snort before resting his head on Jack’s shoulder. After a moment he lifted his head to speak.

“The captain said that he is busy right now. I can account for that. As for pulling up his pants, I haven’t gotten them down yet.” At that point it was Jack’s turn to snort.~~~

ROFLMFAO! Oh god....great story....I love your sense of humor..that line ^ was perfect!

Oh Yeah, I like Will like this, strong and confident! Loved the story, very hot!!!!!

One word... Nice....

eeeeee, now i can read it once more and get distracted without worrying about doing my job!!!!
/“It involves me… bein’ inside o’ you.” Jack hoped he wouldn’t have to explain any more than that./

oooooh, the imagery...wonderful line that...so glad Will agreed

As for young Master Turner...i love your characterisation!!!!!!!

well done, i thouroughly enjoyed it!!!!