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June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit, I'm glad to see this FINALLY updated. I like your writing style so far and your idea is sound. I'm also looking forward to seeing where this goes as I've only seen one other pretty good Jareth/Toby fic out there. Please keep writing and updating, so few of the Labyrinth fics are updated--too many are left unfinished and forgotten.
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June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story and I hope you update again soon.
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May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hi i really like this story its awsome so keep it up ok?
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May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have to say...I find myself intrigued. I hope the next chapter comes out soon. I want to see if Jareths premonition about Toby wishing outloud really is because of Sarah...moe importantly, what does she do wo warrant it. Was it the beating or something worse...can't wait. So many questions. Please post soon!
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April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^o^ Aw... Poor Toby-chan... But, please! Keep writing! I want to see more of this pairing.
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October 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is the first story that i have seen take this approch about toby. I rather like it. I do hope that you are going to continue this story as well as some of the others that you have started writting.
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September 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like this story a lot, please continue! Thanks.
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September 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to see what happens next! Poor Toby! Heh-Sarah's a bitch. I kinda like that. I hope you update soon! I'll keep cing ing back! Great story so far!
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August 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I've just starting reading Labyrinth fanfiction the other day. I saw the movie recently (haven't seen it since I was a kid) and now I've sunk my fangirl fangs into it! I hope you update this fic soon, I can tell already it has a lot of potential! Good luck!
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July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
definitely continue!!!! i want to know what happens and i want to see the boys get their comeuppance and i just REALLY want you to keep going!! hehe