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June 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
mmm, yummy story. and seems to be getting even tastier. so i noticed at
the end of this story you asked why this one was getting more reviews than
some of your slash stories, which usually get more reviews. well i have to admit
i get frustrated with the abundance of slash and lack of het. don't get me wrong
men on men is hot, but sometimes i just need to read about jack bedding a
lass. so there in lies the answer, your story is the perfect combination of slashy
undertones and het. a hard combo to find, and one that i crave. i'm also loving that
jack's 1st thought was elizabeth, when he was told he must marry. please, please
i hope the muses pair them up. i'm always craveing a good elizabeth/jack story as there
are far too few good ones. can't wait till the next chapter!
*rum flavored golden toothed pirate kisses, luv xoxo
the end of this story you asked why this one was getting more reviews than
some of your slash stories, which usually get more reviews. well i have to admit
i get frustrated with the abundance of slash and lack of het. don't get me wrong
men on men is hot, but sometimes i just need to read about jack bedding a
lass. so there in lies the answer, your story is the perfect combination of slashy
undertones and het. a hard combo to find, and one that i crave. i'm also loving that
jack's 1st thought was elizabeth, when he was told he must marry. please, please
i hope the muses pair them up. i'm always craveing a good elizabeth/jack story as there
are far too few good ones. can't wait till the next chapter!
*rum flavored golden toothed pirate kisses, luv xoxo
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May 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Not care, are you crazy, you just shot Jack and are writting one of the greatest and most imaginative pirates fics around, of course we care.
Please update, please.
Rose
Please update, please.
Rose
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May 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
NO NO NO NO!!! Don't you DARE stop posting ESPECIALLY AFTER THAT CLIFFIE!!!!NOOOOOOO
I'll be good. I swear! I'll try harder. Every chapter. One review! But you must make Jack better! EEEP! Amazing chapter, love. I totally DID NOT expect this! MORE MORE MORE!!! Must make sure Jack's gonna survive..
Must say, this is better than having his 'weewee' cut off.
Ta!
Jackfan2
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Cap'n Julie
I'll be good. I swear! I'll try harder. Every chapter. One review! But you must make Jack better! EEEP! Amazing chapter, love. I totally DID NOT expect this! MORE MORE MORE!!! Must make sure Jack's gonna survive..
Must say, this is better than having his 'weewee' cut off.
Ta!
Jackfan2
er...
Cap'n Julie
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May 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like you story. Hope you keep up the good work.
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May 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY..........an update *happy me*. You know i want more, i NEED m Got Got to see little "Jackie" (love that, btw!) and the Turners get re-aquainted ;) Please let Jack be ok. I beg you pleeeeeeease.
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May 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey Hellbourne,
This story is coming very well. I like to read what you write. In fact, when I see the name Hellbourne, I go, "Oooo, yea!" Constructive crit. - Is the captian albino? Cuz then she would have red eyes, and I don't seem to remember if they were. No big whoop.
P.
This story is coming very well. I like to read what you write. In fact, when I see the name Hellbourne, I go, "Oooo, yea!" Constructive crit. - Is the captian albino? Cuz then she would have red eyes, and I don't seem to remember if they were. No big whoop.
P.
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May 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I said it once and I'll say it again I really love this story so far plz continue!!!
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May 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey I really like this story I really like the Siren she knows how to keep men in check(ohh Piper'stwin21 wants to say sorry for her double review there she clicked the review button twice on accident) any ways love the story and hope that it gets updated soon.
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May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooooooh, Jack to the rescue, how ever will Will repay him? *winks* But will Bootstrap be a distraction from the lovely Will? Hope not, but can't wait for another update. Wonder what The Siren wants from Jack tho?? hhhhmmmm This is good!
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May 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
meep! that was a horrible place to stop! well, actually, it was a good place, story-wise...but horrible because i wanna know what happens next!!! anyway, this is really quite an interesting story. i wanna know exactly what it is that Captain Hawk wants of her little bro - and why it is she makes him so damned nervous. and, geez, could Will BE any more freakin pure?! but, that does seem to be his character - ready to kill himself for other people and whatnot. i think you're doing a great job on this, so go and make more good chapters!