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for The Siren

by hellborne

person rose
schedule May 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow, oh, wow, trying very hard to breath, very hard, deep breaths,
yum, and oh god, and quite possibly yum again. This looks like its going to be the best fic i've ever read, keep in up and i may just have to, welli can't think of a reward right now cos you killed my brain.
Rose
person rose
schedule May 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
more, god more, please
person Jackfan2
schedule May 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful couple of chapter, love. Wonderful. As always I eagerly anticipate your updates and this is no exception.

Homeless? Ooooooo.. please tell me that didn't happen! PLEASE! I'm terrribly sorry to hear that. Money problems are all I have lately, so I know your stress well.

Please take care and I pray your situation improves quickly.

Ta!
person Kittynip9
schedule May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes! This is great!
person littlebird
schedule May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Will naked and enslaved - the story definitely looks promising.
Now I'm curious how you will explain that woman. White hair could be a wig and eyelashes painted, but contacs were not yet invented, so how could anyone have violet eyes? If she really is Jack's sister, why do they look so different? Did she inherit more elven-blood or does he dye his hair dark?
person Blue Magic
schedule May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey Hellborne - This homeless thing sucks - has anything improved since you posted. Ihave been worried about you.

Just so you know - I LOVE THE STORY. THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU from a Het fan! Definitely reminds me of the Beauty series with the slaves with the cos. s. Aaii - totally hot, I can't wait. What's she going to do to him? Yum.

PLEAE take care of yourself and drop a note if you just want to chat.
person Piper\'stwin21
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this story. I can't wait for more updates. I really enjoyed the twist about The Siren, how she is related to Jack Sparrow. But I can't wait for more updates on this story.