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for Immortality

by Elisabeta

person Jenfner
schedule January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is an awesome fic, keep up the good work!
person Bunnicle
schedule October 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, lovely lovely! Alittle slow in the beginning, but nice none the less. Can't wait for the next chapter! Please write it soon!
person Yana
schedule October 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is a really great story
can't wait for the next chapter
person Carveus
schedule August 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE!
person hinokumo
schedule August 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! You simply MUST finish this fic! I'm pulling my hair out at where you left it. Please write more soon! Wonderful fic, I love the bad guys as much as I hate them:D
person Margay
schedule July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The dream sequence in chapter 11 was particularly effective. The ending was simply perfect. I don't get a lot of time to read, but I keep coming back to this story. Looking forward to reading more.
person Voyuerer
schedule July 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I just love this story. I can't wait te the the next chapter. Hopefully soon! Hint-Hint :)
person Carveus
schedule June 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
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person God of Insanity
schedule June 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your fanfic ensnared me from the first chapter to the 18th chapter. ^_^ It's really good,neat, organized, detailed, and with a lot of imagery and all that great stuff! I can see you put a lot of work into it, too. I hope you do continue with it, since it's gotten really, really good! So, please update the next chpater(s) when you can! ^^
person Anon
schedule May 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is so awesome. You have to keep on writing it!