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August 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
UPdate this story plz plz i will like to read more..The story got hook i hope u will continue this story. i knw its been wat 2 yrs since your last update but i will love it to more from this story
Hope u update sooooon!!!
Hope u update sooooon!!!
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May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love the story and would like very much for you to continue when you can.
Please update as soon as your muse allows.
Catch ya later.
LL
Please update as soon as your muse allows.
Catch ya later.
LL
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June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello,
Your story is pleasant, off to a good start. Oooo...Jareth going after Sarah and making her his...=Blushes, faints, stands back up= I liked that though Sarah worked at a strip club, she hadn't given up her maiden-head. I disliked that she didn't befriend the other strippers there. Some are very nice. Please work on your few grammatical errors, and resume this wonderful story.
Your story is pleasant, off to a good start. Oooo...Jareth going after Sarah and making her his...=Blushes, faints, stands back up= I liked that though Sarah worked at a strip club, she hadn't given up her maiden-head. I disliked that she didn't befriend the other strippers there. Some are very nice. Please work on your few grammatical errors, and resume this wonderful story.
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April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooo i really enjoyed your story. yes please continue!! i hope to see more really. well, read more that is.^^ any who i hope i can remember to come back to read it cus i kinda skip back and forth between labrynth and rurouni kenshin and others like that. im an obsessed freak i know but i got your story saved on my comp so im sure i'll be checking up now and agian! good luck!
Ymir-chan
Ymir-chan
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December 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
very good story . i like how you explianed that everything looked different because of sarahs spell. i really hope this story continues,and if you would like any additonal info on fairy flok please feel free to e-mail me
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July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lovely..absolutely lovely! :-p
This story has the potential to be either a drama...or sickeningly sweet. I definitely see the drama & suspense.
I'm also glad people are actually writing Lab' fics again.
This story has the potential to be either a drama...or sickeningly sweet. I definitely see the drama & suspense.
I'm also glad people are actually writing Lab' fics again.
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July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another thing, is there something wrong with the format? The Paragraphs are running together.
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June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You wrote Jareth would spoil her rotten. Have a chap where she disobedient and he has to punish her.
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May 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Stelltorytory please continue as soon as posible.
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May 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far. Most fics have them fighting like cats and dogs which is more towards their personalities but I think with somthing as tragic as this happening to Sarah that anything could be different in hers and his personalities. Keep up the good work.