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April 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap. I have no words for this, other than I would love to see more! Damn, I am saving a copy of this immediately.
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July 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've been reading this website for a few years now and only once before felt compelled to rate and review.
I've read this particular story several times and only just now noticed the low rating. I can be a little slow at times.
Whomever rated it so low simply has no appreciation for true eroticism. It could have been ANY 2 characters in this story and it still would have been dreamily arousing. Wrapping such artistry around these particular characters was simply sublime. I think I keep returning to this story not because of any great affection for Freddy or Nancy, but because I have NEVER seen a more seductive story.
I wish you had written more, MercurialDreamer. You have a beautiful and sexy mind.
I've read this particular story several times and only just now noticed the low rating. I can be a little slow at times.
Whomever rated it so low simply has no appreciation for true eroticism. It could have been ANY 2 characters in this story and it still would have been dreamily arousing. Wrapping such artistry around these particular characters was simply sublime. I think I keep returning to this story not because of any great affection for Freddy or Nancy, but because I have NEVER seen a more seductive story.
I wish you had written more, MercurialDreamer. You have a beautiful and sexy mind.
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September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Its more than I expected. High quality.
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May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Actually, this is really So. Damn. Shlocky and OOC.
What to start -- the false advertising in the summary? Nowhere does accepting darkness in love and beauty or embracing it *as* beauty factor in this, since the only "motivations" provided is that control complex you made up.
The character rape. That.. thing supposed to represent Nancy is a raped, beaten corpse of her real character so she can be used as your sockpuppet. Yet again. She. Faces, Things. This is one of -- if not *the* -- single most emphasied characteristic of hers in the movies. She does not, EVER, cower from things. Although, as you're using her to sockpuppet, this isn't really to be unexpected, since her being strong probably intimidates you -- if you can even understand it -- and you have to drag her down to your level.
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"Why had she pretended she didn't bolt awake and yearning, mouth dry? There had been a reason… an important reason"
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"Nancy shuddered and pressed against him, no longer aware of who she was, who he was"
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The Deus Ex Machinas, because you can't characterize worth shit. But really, the random amnesia attacks in every "fic" you write are truly pathetic. And you accoused me of "thinking Nancy could forget like that *snaps fingers* about the cause she died for"? Be able to forgive and move on from, maybe, but you are the one who forces her to forget.
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"I know what I want…
"…And I'll take it."
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Charming. So, he makes it clear he'll rape her for the "motivations" you force on him and she considers it a desirable, acceptable situation -- I think EVERY possible level of character rape has been achieved, at this point. Although, again, not to be unexpected, given your history of making him rape her so you can degrade them to your level. And this probably *the* most degrading character rape in the fandom.
What to start -- the false advertising in the summary? Nowhere does accepting darkness in love and beauty or embracing it *as* beauty factor in this, since the only "motivations" provided is that control complex you made up.
The character rape. That.. thing supposed to represent Nancy is a raped, beaten corpse of her real character so she can be used as your sockpuppet. Yet again. She. Faces, Things. This is one of -- if not *the* -- single most emphasied characteristic of hers in the movies. She does not, EVER, cower from things. Although, as you're using her to sockpuppet, this isn't really to be unexpected, since her being strong probably intimidates you -- if you can even understand it -- and you have to drag her down to your level.
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"Why had she pretended she didn't bolt awake and yearning, mouth dry? There had been a reason… an important reason"
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"Nancy shuddered and pressed against him, no longer aware of who she was, who he was"
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The Deus Ex Machinas, because you can't characterize worth shit. But really, the random amnesia attacks in every "fic" you write are truly pathetic. And you accoused me of "thinking Nancy could forget like that *snaps fingers* about the cause she died for"? Be able to forgive and move on from, maybe, but you are the one who forces her to forget.
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"I know what I want…
"…And I'll take it."
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Charming. So, he makes it clear he'll rape her for the "motivations" you force on him and she considers it a desirable, acceptable situation -- I think EVERY possible level of character rape has been achieved, at this point. Although, again, not to be unexpected, given your history of making him rape her so you can degrade them to your level. And this probably *the* most degrading character rape in the fandom.
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October 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe how good this is! I never tho I'd I'd enjoy reading about this kind of pairing, but your writing style is amazingly good, and you manage to make it believable without distorting the original characters beyond all recognition. Well done!
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June 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was beautiful. I mean, honestly, I don't like het all too much, but this... Eeheehee. mademade me happy ^.^ <--Look, your fic even made me do that face... I haven't done that face in almost two years!
This fic is great like it is, you don't need to add any chapters. However, if you do, I'll be sure to read it.
I can only hope to become a writer as good as yourself.
This fic is great like it is, you don't need to add any chapters. However, if you do, I'll be sure to read it.
I can only hope to become a writer as good as yourself.
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May 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
....Wow...bout time someone wrote a fic between Freddy and Nancy. :-D Now all we need is a fic between Fred and Lori >:3 kekeke
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May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is...exactly the way Freddy/Nancy smut should feel. It's so intimate and delicate and...it's beautiful. *dazed sigh*