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October 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely adore your story, it's my favourite. Thank you for writing and sharing it.
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July 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story!!!! Loved it.
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September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can say nothing more than...Loved it!
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June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You twisted the mythology to work quite well for the Alexandros/Achilles pairing. Such tragedy and yet, they still ended up together. It made things satisfying even though I would have wished Hector had not lost his life. I like how you made Helen the plotting power-hungry woman (which I was beginning to suspect her motives). I thought she had already plotted with Agamemnon, but then when she escaped Troy, I realized it was for her own benefit. Nicely done. You showed how strong the passion was between Achilles and Alexandros and how much they would do to protect each other. This was wonderfully done and I hope you might write more.
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April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, your a great writter
I hope you plan a sequel sometime
bye
I hope you plan a sequel sometime
bye
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December 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was a very touching (and hot at times ^.~) story. I just... it did make me cry. It takes an artist to do that; to weave words so welll as to bring one to tears. True catharsis.
I especially liked the tiny detail that Achilles' foot never truly healed. Thanks for that tiny bit of realism. It just... dunno, made the story seem just a bit more grounded, in a good way.
Congratulations. This was beautiful.
~CassieR
I especially liked the tiny detail that Achilles' foot never truly healed. Thanks for that tiny bit of realism. It just... dunno, made the story seem just a bit more grounded, in a good way.
Congratulations. This was beautiful.
~CassieR
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December 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
don't stop
pppllllllleeeeeeaaaaaassssssssseeeeeee write another story
don't stop
pppllllllleeeeeeaaaaaassssssssseeeeeee write another story
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December 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yay they didn't die
thank you thank you thank you thank you
thank you thank you thank you thank you
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December 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More more! This is fabulous! I love every second of this great tale! Bravi!
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November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love love this story of yours so so much!
But that's a really evil cliffee! You can't just leave it there! Please make it a happy ending? Pls? Pretty pls?
I like how you've blended movie verse so well with your story, but hopefully you don't follow too closely, otherwise that'll mean you'll kill off Achilles! Yikes! The poor dears have gone through so much already!
Great story telling again!
Hugz,
Jamie
But that's a really evil cliffee! You can't just leave it there! Please make it a happy ending? Pls? Pretty pls?
I like how you've blended movie verse so well with your story, but hopefully you don't follow too closely, otherwise that'll mean you'll kill off Achilles! Yikes! The poor dears have gone through so much already!
Great story telling again!
Hugz,
Jamie