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June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad you updated. And it was a very nice update too. The conversation between Paris and Andromache was a good part. It was also kind of sad seeing as he kidnapped Helen for love even though it's not what everyone seems to think. Oh, I'm not sure if anyone's pointed it out to you yet but in an earlier chapter (ch2, I think?) there's a part where you accidentally wrote 'Paris of Sparta' instead of 'Paris of Troy'. Just thought I'd point it out since it might confuse some people. Wonderful job! Can't wait to see more. ^_^
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June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wonderful love, can't wait for more.
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June 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, do write more! It's so wonderful, as there just isn't enough good achillies/paris slash! Please please write the next part soon... maybe with some in iin it? *batts eyelashes*!!
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May 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*stupidly sappy smile* love, such a wonderful thing, nothing else will have you marry someone else for the one you love. great chapter--think helen will be mad when she learns that paris puked when he realised that he would have to marry her? heheehe, i can't wait for achilles to meet paris (it's easier to spell) again.
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May 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You have no idea how happy you make me when you update this amazing fic. Again, another wonderful chapter. The interaction between Hector and Paris is very nicely done. Big brother Hector is wonderfully written. I feel bad for Paris that he has to marry Helen even though he's so smitten with Achilles. The emotions are very real. Awesome job. Can't wait for more. :)
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May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, please hurry with the update! I really like this story! I can't wait for Achilles finding out about Paris/Alexandros!
Please, please hurry!
Kat
Please, please hurry!
Kat
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May 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful update. It's nice to see the story from Achilles' side. I love how you write. I can very much feel the love Achilles and Paris have for each other. This is simply beautiful. I look forward to seeing more.
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May 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, great story so far. I really enjoy how you mix the original story with the movie story and your story. I don't have any critisim except to make character descisons a little more clear- I'm still confused as to why Paris took Helen. Other than that, great writing and I look forward to more chapters...soon
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May 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, I love it. You write so beautifully. Combining elements of Paris' history as a shepherd along with him becoming Prince Paris of Troy was ingenius. Plus the slash and the alternate reason for bringing Helen to Troy! Please continue soon. You've got me hooked. :)
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May 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! Yoe goe got this set up so superbly!
Poor lovesick, shepard Paris...
I just can't wait to see how this will end up, so I hope you plan to updaton! on! ^_^
Poor lovesick, shepard Paris...
I just can't wait to see how this will end up, so I hope you plan to updaton! on! ^_^