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August 7, 2019 at 12:00 AM
I haven't read the original (yet), but this is amazing! The picture of Hector, bound to a pole, raped by Achilles is so hot. As hot as their fight in the movie was :D
And Achilles' men in this complete the picture perfectly. How they are aware what their master is doing and none will say a word against him, even if some may not approve of that. Beautiful.
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August 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Chapter three:
“Brave, honourable words, Prince? What about killing a boy who had never killed a single soul before? Did he deserve to die more than that wretched wife-stealer brother of yours?”
Correction:
"Notice that I did not make it a habit to drag such children to battlefields, unlike yourself, o saintly Achilles of such moral high ground, he who has never spilled the blood of my kin and countrymen." Hector spat. "You must forgive me as seeing one dressed like you, armed like you and leading troops like you fooled me into thinking such a person I'd not known well was you -- when he fooled all your men into believing the very same, people who personally knew him for years. How utterly responsible I, and I alone, am for such a tragedy!"
“Brave, honourable words, Prince? What about killing a boy who had never killed a single soul before? Did he deserve to die more than that wretched wife-stealer brother of yours?”
Correction:
"Notice that I did not make it a habit to drag such children to battlefields, unlike yourself, o saintly Achilles of such moral high ground, he who has never spilled the blood of my kin and countrymen." Hector spat. "You must forgive me as seeing one dressed like you, armed like you and leading troops like you fooled me into thinking such a person I'd not known well was you -- when he fooled all your men into believing the very same, people who personally knew him for years. How utterly responsible I, and I alone, am for such a tragedy!"
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April 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love your story and I hope you will update very soon!^^ Achille/Hector is the best pairing ever!
Keep writing!
Keep writing!
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February 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Very good fic! Hash but well-writed. Will you continue it?
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December 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I would love to read more of this story, it has a loy of potential to it and I want to see what else transpires between Hector and Achilles. Make the story even more drama, angst filled; make Hector get pregnant with Achilles's baby while he's still a prisoner of the Achilles and they still despise one another. But so far its good and I like it.
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September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope this story will be updated if not... Please let your readers know!!!
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September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, wow! This is so HOT! Poor Hector, and I think, poor Achilles too! Please continue with this tale!
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January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
finally, something decent to read. I was beginning to give up! Hope to see more soon.-Thrice
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December 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really really like this story. Are you going to update soon.
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November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
are you going to write anymore? i love this story! please do!