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September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is a really good story, im really enjoying it. like the only one i can find where the characters aren't secretly in love with each other! its thrilling, keep up the good work
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July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is bloody brilliant. I've never read anything from an autho una unafraid of being brutal in their writing. It works very nicely, and you have quite a talent for realism in your descriptions. I wait on the edge of my seat for your next installment, love. :)
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July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW!! you have to continue. I want to know what happens next so please, PLEASE!!! continue. Thank You.
later
later
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June 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just re-read your fic... *dies again*
I need to read the rest of your fic girl! You do know that don't you?!!?!? Guh...
*need fic* *want fic* *must have fic*
*hugs*
- jianu
I need to read the rest of your fic girl! You do know that don't you?!!?!? Guh...
*need fic* *want fic* *must have fic*
*hugs*
- jianu
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June 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Like the changes, they make the story more believable and they make the story evettertter that it was and the new chapter. I can´t wait to see what you are going to come up with next. Please keep writing.
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June 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The change to the end of chapter makes sense. I like that you show a previous attraction between Achilles and Hector in the flashback. The Achilles/Patroclus sex scenes were quite hot too. Poor Hector, courageous and defiant to the end. :( I also like your Odysseus characterization. It's very him.
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June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
His Arm?! You have got to be kidd Tha That would ruin the story, Hector would die and that´s no fun. But I like it otherwise please keep writing.
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May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please continue. I thought your story was really good. Update soon alright.
Bye
Bye
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May 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your description is really good, I can't wait to see where you are going with this.
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May 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi everyone! Thanks for every review! I've revised the story, both chapters will be different (as well as the next ones), and I'll be posting them soon. Hang in there, and hope you guys will come back and read :) you make it worth writing!