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*reads part 3*

*flails*

*thud*

I love thee!!

:loves it all:

'bout the 3rd chap:
Dom!Achilles and Sub!Patroclus is something original,and you made it so good :)

"When he was still a boy of twelve, he had loved to bathe with Achilles after an intense combat training session, had loved to watch his older companion’s graceful form as he dove into the water, was struck with envy of every one of the droplets cascading down his perfect body." "There was no gentleness in his kiss, only a burning desire that would either inflame or consume. Patroclus met him passion for passion, ready to be devoured as he sank into his lover’s embrace. He let out a startled moan as Achilles ground his hips against his own, feeling his hot flesh throb with wanting, as Achilles mercilessly increased the friction, nearly driving Patroclus insane. He never wanted it to end, the glorious sensations that were wag ovg over him. Gentleness, tenderness, these things were good in moderation, but there was a time and a place for savage hunger, and this was it."


Hot imaginaries again ^_~ Keep it up

*HOWLz*

Akhilles and Patroclus doing the nasty is my new-eh,ok,not so new-drug ^_^

You made my day.

Wow!! I always found these two be hot togeher,but you made them even hotter.And I love the fact that you made Patroclus a strong warrior at his own right and not that pouty weak boy in movimovie.(Still I prefer him older than Achilles and being the brains of the outfit like in canon,Lol).Cool stuff,rock on.

***Tumbsup***

Cousin,right ;)

Keep it up,the world needs more Ach/Paton lon love!

:D Better,hotter,more ineresting this one.And don't worry,none writes perfect battle scenes,I guess.You've done a quite good job for a first attempt.Loved it and liked 'pauses' that gave a further look to the chracters like "Patroclus had never known Achilles to go so slowly, or to be so gentle—Achilles was not a gentle person, on the battlefield or in the bedroom, and Patroclus had never demanded gentleness from him. Achilles was fire, passionate and absolute, and Patroclus had always been willing to accept his burns as they came. If such was the price for embracing a flame, he would pay it gladly, until the day it consumed him." Very,nice,continue if you may!

Woohoo! More story! *does happy dance* You are my hero. ^_~ And, I must say, you're very cool. Not odid did you stick to the Illiad in the important places, but you took the thought right out of my head when you said that you preferred the movie version of ages for the boys, etc. EXACTLY what I wanted. AND you wounded Patroclus. I love it when my boytoys are tortured. *sigh*

Thank you for continuing! The world always needs more Patroclus and Achilles, and since you say that the next chapter will be up due to popular demand, I gve you...*drumroll* POPULAR DEMAND! A.k.a, MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE.....

*ahem* Please continue. ^_^

COUSIN. (you're not the only one giggling)

w00t! *encourages you to keep it up*