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September 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
M m m m m-- Yum! Hot & sexy without being vulgar. Love the Kyp/Jaina pairing-- I think they're perfect together, lot of potential for dark, naugsex.sex.
One small thing: there are no "inches" in Star Wars. They're on the Imperial system of meters & centimeters.
Minor nitpick only for a hot, racy story.
One small thing: there are no "inches" in Star Wars. They're on the Imperial system of meters & centimeters.
Minor nitpick only for a hot, racy story.
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June 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice! I'd like to see a continuation of this-there's just not enough NJO adult fics out there! Keep it up!
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June 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
"Give me an hour, and then I'll show you."
Loved that line, Dana. ^_^ I loved this fic. It's good to see your writing without all the restrictions that they dump on you at TF.N JC. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.
Loved that line, Dana. ^_^ I loved this fic. It's good to see your writing without all the restrictions that they dump on you at TF.N JC. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.