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for Come Undone

by DarthBreezy

person JediGem
schedule December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE FINISH!!
person Laurachan (too lazy to login)
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh, so sweet! I love how you describe Anakin's and Obi-wan's feelings...
^^
please keep it up...
And maybe you should write in the summary that this is an Anakin/Padmé ff ^^

I almost didn't read it... what a loss!
person wes
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well this is very interesting hope you update soon oh ya when is this all taking place?
person pensfan100
schedule May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am enjoying this story very much! You paint a vivid portrait of all three's emotions and misgivings. The bond between Anakin and Padme is so strong and private. It's poignant but compelling. Keep it up!
Bonnie
person StormXPadme
schedule May 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
very sweet *smiels* more, please :)