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for Twist of the Fates

by Sagittarius

person kirameki
schedule July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY! An update. So happy! Although leaving us off like that! Such a tease. XD Anyways, hurry with the next chappie. I expect some nice hot smutty goodness. =9
person Amber
schedule July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nothing better than checking one of your favorite stories and finding out that they have a new chapter up! Awesome work with this story!!!!! Can't wait to read the next chapter!

person willow
schedule July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fab update - loved it, especially the detail you go into as to what Paris and Achilles are thinking and all the imagery you toss in here and there (Paris trembling like the flowers on the beach, Achilles' hair in the moonlight - very nice)...but how wicked of you to leave off where you did! You won't make us wait too long for chapter 12 will you????? :)
person Yana
schedule July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yes someone saved him
person kirameki
schedule July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this. Please do continue it and update soon. I love che chemistry you create between Achilles and Paris. So glad Paris was spared from Agamnenon. (argh can't spell it for the life of me). Anyways, I loved it and hope to see more. XD
person Voyuerer
schedule July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi. I love this story! YEAH!! Achilles rescued Paris. I love the He's MIne!
person Sebena
schedule June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YIPPY!!!!!!!!!!! Thank you, thank you!!!! Excellent chapter, please post more soon!
person Amber
schedule June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh my god! You can't stop there! You have to update!!! I'm there...you put it all into words that I can see everything in my mind. Can't wait to read the next chapter!
person willow
schedule June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Each update leaves me more desperate for the next. I am loving your pairing of Paris and Achilles. Paris being swept up and carried away to safety by Achilles was just dreamy. Can't wait to see what you have planned next.
person morelwen
schedule June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love your fic, it's very well narrated and described, update soon please ^-^