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June 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What a horrible place to leave off!
I love the fic so far. The wri is is fantastic, the scenario is realistic, and everyone seems in character to I g I give it a 10 :)
I love the fic so far. The wri is is fantastic, the scenario is realistic, and everyone seems in character to I g I give it a 10 :)
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June 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really love this version of Troy. i hope to see a new chapter in the near future.
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June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please hurry to update this fic. So far it's my favorite Troy fic, and I've read a lot of them.
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June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Not only was this well written, but it was extremly hott! Please write the next chapter soon.
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June 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great, great and great again. Feed us soon with new chapters!!! PLEASE!!!
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June 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is excellent!
I absolutely love it.
Can't wait to read more....
Update soon!
I absolutely love it.
Can't wait to read more....
Update soon!
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June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was soooooooo good!!! Your level of detail, plot building, and character building was amazing. You have done a fabulous job with this story. I can't wait for Ch. 5. Please update soon!!
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June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh no please don't let the king know that Paris is with them
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June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story! Very very well-written and gawd the cliffhangers are so effective! I liked the flashback about Troilus.. you've set up a very convincing and interesting background for Achilles' obsession with Paris. Cant hardly wait for you to get to the main event ;) Hope you update soon?
cheers, Cyndra
cheers, Cyndra
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June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Patroclus' decision to tell Agamemnon is a good twist - I like it VERY much. I understand his jealousy and I love it when I can actually feel that emotion pouring from the words. Very good job. ;)
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I'vingving the vulnerability that Paris feels, yet the defiance he possesses throughout it all. I can't wait to see how it will turn out when Agamemnon finds out about Achilles' prize catch. ;)
Keep up the wonderful work. Cheers!
Keep up the wonderful work. Cheers!