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for Twist of the Fates

by Sagittarius

person Yana
schedule November 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
nooooooooooooo don't stop
i was enjoying that
person Lynne
schedule November 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was a wonderful story! I enjoyed it all and the last line was truly great! Thank you for sharing.

L.
person Masquerade
schedule November 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm so sad to see this story end, but oh how wonderful it is! I might go back and read it again! You have done such a wonderful job with this. Please tell me you will write more. This would have made a fabulous movie! You are a talented, skilled writer and don't ever let anyone tell you otherwise!
person Mereneith
schedule November 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
No!!! Please don't end!! I can't believe its over! *sniff* I love this story so much! *sob* You are a fabulous writer with a great sense of character development and plot development. I am very sad to see this story end. I look forward to seeing what you will be working on next.
person Mereneith
schedule November 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I hope chapter 27 will be ready soon. I loved Ch. 26 and I can't wait to find out what will happen next!! You are doing a fabulous job with this story!!!
person Masquerade
schedule November 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So glad to see you updated! This tale gets better and better every minute and every sentence. Poor wounded Paris; but now he's with Achilles and will be safe. Right?
person Yana
schedule November 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh poor Paris
don't worry
life will get better
person Yanic
schedule November 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wonderful, just loved it! can't wait to see where they end up going and whether or not they get their happy ending...
person Masquerade
schedule November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic so much. You incorporated the lines from the movie so smoothly and effortlessly. Your style is something I have not seen in many fics before! Great job!
person Bunnicle
schedule November 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh, i just luv your story! i was wondering what you were going to do with this chapter, after all, i thought you killed all the main characters. and if you killed them, what's the point of going on with the story, right? but mesa glad that they not be dead! yay!