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for Twist of the Fates

by Sagittarius

person azure
schedule September 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor, Poor Paris...T_T
person AmberKB
schedule September 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm just loving this story. I'm checking every day for updates. Awesome work.
person halcyon
schedule September 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love your tender Achilles, but now I found I love your rough Achilles more (giggle~~)
person Yanic
schedule September 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
0_o but Hector won't die right...I don't think he should... great story though
person Roy Mcy McAran
schedule September 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, the sex is hot!
But I am more a Patroclos fan than a Paris one. Paris is just sooo... the first time I heard about the Illiad I made jokes about his stupidy (sp?). I still can only sigh at him and shake my head not understandihy hhy he is THAT way.
Poor Patroclos! Treated as if his love meant nothing... go play with your toys! As if... Achilles gave him his wants and dre.. a.. ahan han denies him as if he were still a child. Before Pat was at least a lover if not allowed to be a warrior. Afterwards ha was nothing at all: "You are not a Myrmidon, yet," as Achilles say shortly before the landing. I hurt for poor Patroclos. That he dies was inevitable. Now comes the true tragedy because Achilles still loved him as a cousin even if he betrayed him as a lover. Pat could either react with depression and become suicidal or with agression like he learned from Achilles and attack. Pat wasn´t experienced enough for Hector.
Now... well, that is part of the great tragedy... Hectors death, Achilles death... it would be fitting... not some romantized nonsense like in the film (and in truth Patroclos was the grown up and Achilles pretty young when he came to Troy)...
I love your work!
person Yana
schedule September 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
noooooooooooooooooooooooo don't kill Hector
it wasn't his fault
person ccds
schedule August 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm scared, seems nothing'll change.....

Patroclus will die, Hector will die, Achilles will die, Paris will die........... hatred, revenge, more hatred, more revenge........

pleeease, don't be so cruel to them, your Achilles/Paris are so sweet together (crying~)
person willow
schedule August 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay - Paris finally surrenders, but I'm betting it's going to get angsty now that Patroclus is up to mischief. Looking forward to more.
person Yana
schedule August 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I bet they don't go
please don't kill Hecter
person ringil
schedule August 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love your Paris, he so sweeet^^

But it's still a little bit sad that Paris put so much trust in Achilles' words, maybe deep inside he knew he had no one else to depend on now

Hope everything will be fine, like Achilles promised