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Thanks for the great update. Very subtle sex scene--I loved it. Can't wait to see where you're taking this. Beth Palladino

Great update. More, more. Beth Palladino

Thanks a million for finally updating this wonderful story. Don't mind Shadowcat, she sees Mary Sues lurking in almost every female original character. I can't wait to see more of this. P.S. You use the word 'rouge' several times in part one. I believe you mean 'rogue'. 'Rouge' is a color or another word for a type of makeup. Thanks again for updating, Beth Palladino

Good suspense, even if it's too short. As a fellow writer, I'd like to warn you of the dangers of Mary Sue. An original character that's perfect, self sacrificing, breath takingly beautiful, yada yada, is a Mary Sue. If you look around on the web, you'll find a variety of places that will give you full definitions. Give Cree a few flaws, ok? I'd hate for her to be a Mary Sue. Please continue your story soon. There are too few good Hellboy fan fics out there.

Well, ShadowCat, Thanks for the review, but believe you me, I am aware of what a Mary-Sue is. I can't promise much, but I can Promise There ain't no Mary-Sues in my universe....Just wait til the story's done....

You are going to write more of this, aren't you? Aren't You? Rah!

Hi, Thanks for the update. I loved it. This is still one of the best Hellboy stories I have read.

This is one of the best 'comicverse' Hellboy fanfics I have read. Please post more. Thanks for the great read.