rate_review Reviews

i really enjoy reading your story. it's very much like what was shown in the movie, but you filled up the gaps. no typos and good english :)

I actually liked it a lot. It's too bad it stopped right before it got to the good parts. Hope you write more.

I love your story. you have to keep going or else I will die or in the least feel realy deprvied. so I beg you to keep going

Wow. I really love this story. Its great, really. You should update soon :) But take your time. There is no rush coming from me. I hope you are not pressured. That may cause the chapter to come out not you best. So just relax and update when you can :) -A fan

Catie,
I'd like to thank you for your honest review. You make it quite clear that you have never read a movie script in your life.
There will be a difference here because I can take liberties that a movie can not. I'm not restricted by censors or by the need to please (or not offend) the general public.
My intention was never to make up my own version of "events" and I made mention of that at the start of this story. It was in my description, perhaps you didn't bother to read it, but it was quite clear.
Anyway, thanks again for taking the time to review :)

Ok if i wanted the script of the movie i would have just watched it. Because thats basically what this story is especially in the second chapter! This is supposed to be fanfiction not movie scripts!!

Liked the story so far. Very solid writing. True to the movie ;) I'm anxiously waiting for the next chapter though! Go for it :)

This is lovely. I think you have described everything extremely well and the chemistry between Briseis(sp?) and Achilles is already rather tangible. Keep it up and update. ;)

I would sweetie but I can't remember my goddamn login name (not the same as the author name).

Please update. I love this story. More , Please!!!!