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July 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is very good, please continue this if you can. An excellent story.
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February 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter, update soon Pleaseeeeee !
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August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFG I NEED MORE!!!
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April 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
More! Come on!
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August 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Illy lly enjoyed reading your story. I think it's very good and I hope that you write more and post it!
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June 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for writting more, this is SO GOOD, I can't wait till more!!!!!=:)
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June 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wee! *dances for joy*
Go Hector! Ooh, Achilles is definitely furious. Nice dialogue, not at all over the top. More please!
Go Hector! Ooh, Achilles is definitely furious. Nice dialogue, not at all over the top. More please!
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June 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi J! Wow, I loved the fighting scene so much. Very visual and strong--you can feel the power of the two men through their fightings, how passionate their interaction was from the beginning. You know how much I love their first encounter, lol! I also liked how you expanded Hector's thought entering the temple, giving us a glimpse into his mind and showed how he thinks, feels, when it comes to battles. Loved when he thought he'd seen Apollo himself there. Yeah, with such intense blond hair and body like that, who wouldn't!! ::clapclap:: Keep writing!
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June 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. Where oh where is this story going I wonder. I like the first chapter and I hope you will keep on writing.
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June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Filled with tension! Your Hector/Achilles is wonderful showing their different views, cutting remarks, cunning tactics and of course physical fights! :D
Very nice action scene at the end there and nice take on Hector's thoughts upon entering the temple. Wonderful read.
Very nice action scene at the end there and nice take on Hector's thoughts upon entering the temple. Wonderful read.