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for Thuvenuvenir

by kaijawest

person Emma
schedule March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, I can't believe i've never reviewed this! :o
It's brilliance! :D Very, very hooooooooot!
person Jackfan2
schedule June 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
END!?!?!?!? NOOOOO.. You can't stop there! You MUST add on more! A good threesome between Jack/Will/Elizabeth is hard to find on ff.net. The only thing that would make it truly perfect would be the addition of Anamaria~! 'T would be great if the next time Jack and Will were off on a little foray, if Ana and Liz didn't suddenly find that the two of them could truly give one another pleasure without the men. THEN, a foursome would be SWEEEEEEEET!

You ARE going to add more right? Damn but we didn't get to see Jack get off with Elizabeth! UGH . MORE MORE MORE~!
schedule June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
My gawds that was hot!

You might want to check your spelling in a couple of places...maybe 3. But WOW!!!

Just make sure you keep writing!

Hellborne